Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct small errors, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Also prefer 'red' or 'red in colour', and 'twenty-one' with a hyphen when spoken clearly. Replace repeated phrases like 'used to' with varied verbs.

Ví dụ: Yes. My dad bought me a red bike when I was twelve, and it had twenty-one gears. I often rode it to school and to buy groceries, and sometimes I went off-road on nearby trails. Because it was relatively new and sporty, my friends were often a bit jealous.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and coherence: begin with a clear direct response, correct collocations (e.g., 'popular in my country', 'keep their bodies fit', 'commute by bike'), and avoid repeating 'also'. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'moreover' and be specific about who uses bikes and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people cycle to keep fit and save money; for example, students and office workers often commute by bike. Moreover, cycling reduces fuel consumption and traffic congestion, which is better for the environment.

× Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was twelve.

✓ Yes, my dad bought me a bike when I was twelve.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct and uses the past simple appropriately for a completed action in the past.

× The bike was red colour and it had twenty one gears in it.

✓ The bike was red in color and it had twenty-one gears.

'Red colour' is not natural English; use 'red in color' or 'the color was red'. Also hyphenate 'twenty-one' when used as a compound number adjective. Suggestion: say 'The bike was red and had twenty-one gears.' for conciseness.

× I used to take this bike to buy groceries and for other off road cycling as well.

✓ I used to take this bike to buy groceries and for other off-road cycling as well.

Use the compound adjective 'off-road' with a hyphen. The structure 'used to' + base verb 'take' is correct. Suggestion: 'I used this bike to buy groceries and for off-road cycling.' is more natural.

× I used to take this back to school very often so all my friends would be jealous of me.

✓ I used to take it back to school very often, so all my friends would be jealous of me.

Pronoun 'this' refers to a thing near speaker; 'it' is the correct pronoun for the bike. Add a comma before 'so' when joining independent clauses. Suggestion: 'I often took it to school, so all my friends were jealous.' is more concise and natural.

× Here's bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country.

'Here's' is incorrect here (contraction of 'here is'). The correct subject is 'Bikes' without 'here is'. Suggestion: Start with 'Bikes are popular in my country.' or 'Here, bikes are popular in my country.' if you want to use 'here'.

× People use bicycles to have their body fit.

✓ People use bicycles to keep their bodies fit.

Use 'keep ... fit' to express maintaining fitness; 'have their body fit' is unidiomatic. Also 'body' should be plural 'bodies' to agree with 'people'. Suggestion: 'People ride bicycles to keep fit.' is more natural.

× Also, there are a set of people who use bikes to have their daily commutes happening.

✓ Also, there is a group of people who use bikes for their daily commutes.

'A set of people' is unnatural; use 'a group of people' or 'some people'. Use 'for' rather than 'to have ... happening'. 'Daily commutes' is fine, but match singular/plural: 'there is a group' or 'there are some people'. Suggestion: 'Also, some people use bikes for their daily commutes.'

× Also, this helps to reduce the fuel economy of the country.

✓ Also, this helps to reduce the country's fuel consumption.

'Reduce the fuel economy' is incorrect: 'fuel economy' refers to efficiency, not consumption. The intended meaning is lowering fuel use, so 'fuel consumption' is appropriate. Use 'the country's' to show possession. Suggestion: 'This also helps reduce the country's fuel consumption.'