Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use past simple), avoid irrelevant or unclear comments (e.g., "I'm not much feminine") and give one or two brief supporting details (who gave it, occasion, what you liked). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I did. I got a small bike when I was about four or five because my parents bought it for my birthday on November 10th. I remember enjoying learning to ride it in our neighborhood, and I used it every day until I was older.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement), clarity and specificity. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Avoid vague phrases like "the average is quite good" — instead compare clearly (e.g., cost, fuel efficiency). Keep answers natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, motorcycles and scooters are very popular in my country because they are affordable and easier to use in heavy traffic. For example, they cost much less to buy and run than cars, and many people prefer them for short city trips.

× I exactly don't know my age at that time.

✓ I didn't exactly know my age at that time.

The sentence refers to a past time 'at that time' so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Don't' is present tense; use 'didn't' for negative past. Suggestion: use 'didn't exactly know' or 'I don't remember exactly how old I was.'

× Yes, but my parents gifted me on my birthday, that was on 10th of November and I wanted something already because I'm not much feminine, so they gifted me a small bike.

✓ Yes, my parents gave me a bike for my birthday, which was on the 10th of November, and I had already wanted one because I'm not very feminine, so they gave me a small bike.

Multiple issues: 'gifted me on my birthday' is awkward — use 'gave me a bike for my birthday.' Include the definite article 'the 10th of November.' 'Already' should pair with 'had wanted' or 'had already wanted' for past perfect; simplified to 'had already wanted one.' 'Not much feminine' is ungrammatical; use 'not very feminine.' Also maintain consistent past tense: 'gave' not 'gifted' twice is acceptable but 'gave' is more natural.

× In my place, two Wheelers like bikes and scooters has always been very popular due to many reasons.

✓ In my area, two-wheelers like bikes and scooters have always been very popular for many reasons.

Subject 'two-wheelers' is plural, so the verb must be 'have' not 'has.' Also 'in my place' is better as 'in my area'; 'two-wheelers' should be hyphenated and lowercase. 'Due to many reasons' is awkward; use 'for many reasons.'

× For example, they are very convenient and very budget friendly.

✓ For example, they are very convenient and very budget-friendly.

Hyphenate the compound adjective 'budget-friendly' when it precedes or describes a noun. Grammar-wise this sentence is acceptable, but formatting of the compound adjective should be corrected.

× It matches the income of the population in our country and one more thing that I felt that the average is quite good of bike than a four Wheeler.

✓ They match the income of the population in our country, and another thing I feel is that, on average, bikes are better than four-wheelers.

The subject refers to plural 'they' (bikes and scooters), so use 'match' not 'matches.' The original sentence is also ungrammatical and awkward: 'one more thing that I felt that the average is quite good of bike than a four Wheeler' is unclear. Rephrase to 'another thing I feel is that, on average, bikes are better than four-wheelers.' Use plural 'four-wheelers' and hyphenate. Maintain present tense 'I feel' if stating a general opinion, or past 'I felt' if past. Here use present 'I feel' to match the question about popularity.