Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ “write” thay vì “ride”, “grade 3” có thể nói là “third grade” hoặc “when I was about eight”). Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm chi tiết cụ thể bằng cách dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu và tập trung vào thông tin hữu ích (ai mua, khi nào, bạn dùng xe để làm gì, cảm xúc hoặc kỷ niệm ngắn).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was in third grade, and I often rode it to my friend’s house after school. I remember feeling very proud because it was my first real freedom to go out by myself.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và lặp lại thông tin từ câu trước. Cần trả lời trực tiếp về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp, rồi bổ sung lý do cụ thể (ví dụ tiện lợi, rẻ, tốt cho sức khỏe) và sử dụng liên từ để diễn đạt rõ ràng. Sửa lỗi từ vựng/ ngữ pháp (ví dụ “ready” nên là “ride” hay “use” nếu ý là đi xe).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns and among students. They are affordable, easy to park and a good way to keep fit, so many people choose them for short trips and commuting.

× Yes, I had the bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle.

The definite article 'the' incorrectly specifies a particular bicycle; use the indefinite article 'a' for mentioning one of many or when introducing it for the first time. Use 'a bicycle' to mean one bicycle in general. Grammar problem type ID:22

× My mother bought it for me when I was grade 3 and I used to write it to visit my friend after school.

✓ My mother bought it for me when I was in grade 3, and I used to ride it to visit my friend after school.

'When I was grade 3' is missing the preposition 'in' for ages/grades: say 'in grade 3'. 'Used to write it' is incorrect word choice; the verb should be 'ride' for bicycles. Also add a comma before 'and' connecting two clauses. Use past tense 'used to ride' to describe a habitual past action. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I had the bicycle.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country.

The student's repeated sentence 'Yes, I had the bicycle.' does not answer the examiner's question about general popularity. For that question, use a general statement with plural 'bicycles' and no article. Example: 'Yes, bicycles are popular in my country.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× My mother bought it for me when I was grade 3 and I used to ready to do exercises.

✓ My mother bought it for me when I was in grade 3, and I used to ride it to exercise.

Again, use 'in grade 3' with the preposition 'in'. 'Used to ready to do exercises' is ungrammatical: 'ready' is wrong form; likely intended 'ride' and 'to exercise' is more natural than 'to do exercises' in this context. Use 'used to ride it to exercise' to express past habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:5