Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail. Avoid fillers like “yeah” followed by repetition. Use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit my friends every weekend.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion, then give a specific reason and an example. Remove hesitation sounds and correct word choice (e.g., “quite popular” not “the buy some quite popular”). Use a linking word like “because” or “because of this.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, many of my friends cycle to work or university, especially in the warmer months.

× Uh yes, uh, the buy some quite popular in the country as much of my friends have it.

✓ Uh yes, bikes are quite popular in the country because many of my friends have them.

Errors identified: 'the buy some' is nonsensical and likely intended 'bikes are'; missing subject-verb agreement and incorrect noun phrase. 'As much of my friends have it' is incorrect: 'much' should be 'many' for countable 'friends', and pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to match 'friends'. Also 'because' or 'since' better links reason. Suggestion: use 'bikes are' (present plural verb with plural subject), 'many' for countable nouns, and 'them' as plural object pronoun.