Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's my gift.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often see many people ride bikes on the street and they were very happy to ride it.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且不自然。应直接回答并补充具体细节(例如谁送的、何时得到、车的类型或你与它的回忆),使用一到两句支持性细节并使用连词保持连贯。避免语法错误(如时态和代词)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a red bicycle for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to school every day. It was a simple single-speed bike but I have fond memories of learning to ride it with my dad's help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答总体可以,但句子有语法和表达问题,应更自然和精确地描述普及性并提供具体原因或例子。使用连接词(for example, because)并注意时态一致与主谓一致,避免笼统描述“they were very happy”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, I often see commuters and students cycling to work and school because cycling is cheap, healthy, and convenient in many cities.
× Yes, it's my gift.
✓ Yes, it was my gift.
问题类型:5: 过去时问题。学生在回答“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”(过去时)时使用了现在时“it's”。在上下文中应使用过去时来保持时态一致。建议:将动词和系动词改为过去时态,例如使用“was”或更自然的表达“Yes, it was a gift I got when I was a child.” 保持句子与提问的过去时间一致。
× Yes, I often see many people ride bikes on the street and they were very happy to ride it.
✓ Yes, I often see many people riding bikes on the street, and they look very happy when riding them.
问题类型:6: 现在时问题;8: 动词+ing 形式;27: 主谓一致(代词指代问题)。原句中“I often see”是现在时,后半句却用了过去时“they were”,时态不一致,应统一为现在时。动词“ride”在作为现在进行或非限定动词时更自然用动名词形式“riding”。代词“it”不适合指复数“bikes”,应使用复数代词“them”。建议:保持时态一致(全句使用现在时),将“ride”改为“riding”,并把“it”改为“them”或使用非代词结构如“when they ride bikes”。