Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did have a bike when I was in the primary school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, many people have bikes, especially they are riding bikes to work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,但比较简短且有轻微语法/用词不自然(“in the primary school” 更常说成“when I was in primary school”或“when I was at primary school”)。为提升得分,应用一到两句补充具体细节(例如什么时候得到的,骑车去哪里,是否学会自行修理等),并使用连接词使表达更流畅。注意句子数量不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was at primary school. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I often rode it to my friends’ houses after school. It was a bright red bike with a small bell, and learning to balance on it was one of my proudest childhood achievements.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答正面但过于简单,且语法可改进(“they are riding bikes to work” 可说成“many people ride bikes to work”)。应提供具体原因或对比来支持观点,例如说明城市/乡村差异、环境或交通原因,并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。保持回答自然且不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in urban areas. Many people ride bikes to work because it is cheap and often faster than driving during rush hour. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes that make cycling convenient and safe.
× Yes, I did have a bike when I was in the primary school.
✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was in primary school.
问题类型:冠词使用错误(Article errors)。 说明:在英语中,表示教育阶段时通常不需要在“primary school”前加不定冠词或定冠词,除非指特定的一所学校(例如“the primary school in my village”)。句中写作“in the primary school”会让人以为说话者指特定的那一所小学,而非一般意义上的小学生时期。改为“in primary school”更符合习惯用法。 建议:当描述一般的学校经历或阶段(primary school, high school, university)时,通常省略冠词;只有指特定学校时才使用“the”。
× Yes, many people have bikes, especially they are riding bikes to work.
✓ Yes, many people have bikes; especially, they ride bikes to work.
问题类型:代词/句子结构使用不当(Incorrect use of pronouns / sentence structure)。 说明:原句中“especially they are riding bikes to work”结构不自然。通常“especially”后接简洁的陈述(例如主语+动词),而不需要使用进行时且不需要重复“they are”。此外,使用现在一般时(ride)更恰当,因为这是一个经常性、习惯性的动作。将其改为“they ride bikes to work”或更简洁的“especially to ride to work”都可以。 建议:表达习惯性动作时使用一般现在时;避免在同一句中重复冗余的主语结构,可用分号或逗号连接短句以保持流畅。