Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give a couple of specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and correct small grammar errors ("at the present" → "as a present"; "practicing it" → "learning to ride it"). Also clarify the injury timeline (past vs present).

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a pretty girly bike when I was a child. My father bought it as a present for my birthday, and I spent many afternoons learning to ride it. However, I once fell and injured my leg, which left a scar that I still have today.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and linking words. Begin with a topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons and contrast using linking phrases (e.g., "however"). Avoid incorrect word choices ("per day gift", "write" for "ride").

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular among children in my country. Parents often buy bikes as birthday presents or rewards for good behavior. However, adults rarely use bikes for commuting or running errands because public transport and cars are more convenient.

× Yes, uh, I remember I had a nice, uh, girly bike.

✓ Yes, uh, I remember I had a nice girly bike.

This sentence had no major grammar error but contained extra filler commas and hesitation markers; remove unnecessary commas and extra fillers to make it clear and natural. The past tense 'had' is appropriate because the speaker refers to childhood possession.

× My father bought it for me at the present on my birthday and uh, I was practicing it and I injured my leg until now the the wound still uh.

✓ My father bought it for me as a present on my birthday, and while I was practicing, I injured my leg; the wound is still not healed.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'at the present' should be 'as a present' or 'as a gift'; tense and clause connection are awkward—use 'while I was practicing' to show simultaneous actions (verb + -ing form issue but covered under preposition and tense). 'I injured my leg until now the wound still' is ungrammatical: use present perfect or present continuous 'the wound is still not healed' to indicate a continuing state. Also remove duplicated 'the'. Suggestion: use clear clause connectors and correct prepositions.

× Yes, it is extremely popular in my country for, uh, little children.

✓ Yes, they are extremely popular in my country among young children.

Issue: pronoun 'it' refers to 'bikes' which is plural; use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'for little children' is better expressed as 'among young children' for natural collocation.

× Uh, they got it as a per day, per day gift and, uh, but it's not that, uh, common for adults to write, uh, for work or, uh, for visit, uh, around or, uh.

✓ They often receive them as daily gifts, but it's not common for adults to use bikes for commuting to work or for getting around when visiting places.

Problems: 'got it as a per day, per day gift' is ungrammatical; use 'receive them as daily gifts' or 'get them as gifts frequently'. 'It's not that common for adults to write' is wrong verb choice: 'write' should be 'ride'. Also correct 'for work or for visit around' to 'for commuting to work or for getting around when visiting places'. Ensure verb forms match subjects and meaning is clear.