Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, Adam, where do you go to?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Look what place like find places.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 12.0

Gợi ý: The student's reply does not answer the question. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when, how often you rode it, or a memory). Keep the total to no more than five sentences and use linking words (e.g., ‘and’, ‘because’, ‘so’). Also avoid irrelevant questions or phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it almost every day after school with my friends. Because we lived near a park, we often raced each other along the paths. It was my favorite toy and helped me become more independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: The student's response is unclear and does not answer the question. To improve, start with a direct opinion (Yes/No/Partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples and use linking words to connect ideas (for example, ‘because’, ‘however’, ‘also’). Keep answers concise (maximum five sentences) and use vocabulary relevant to popularity (e.g., commuting, recreation, infrastructure).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and several communities organize weekend group rides. However, they are less common in rural areas where distances are longer and public transport is limited.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect question formation / Sentence structure errors

× Uh, Adam, where do you go to?

✓ Uh, Adam, where did you go?

This sentence is intended to answer a past-time question (Examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child). The student used present simple question form 'where do you go to', which is incorrect for past reference. According to the provided list, this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use past simple 'did' plus base verb 'go' to ask about past location: 'Where did you go?' Also, omit the final preposition 'to' unless followed by an object (e.g., 'Where did you go to school?'). Suggestion: match tense to the examiner's question and use 'Where did you go?' or 'Where did you ride your bike?'.

Sentence structure errors / Incorrect word order and missing words

× Look what place like find places.

✓ I used to look for nice places to ride my bike.

The original sentence is ungrammatical: wrong word order and missing auxiliary/verb forms, so it fits Sentence Structure Errors (ID 26) and also relates to verb forms (IDs 6/8). The examiner's question asked if bikes are popular in your country, so an appropriate reply should be a clear statement. The corrected sentence uses 'used to' to indicate habitual past activity ('I used to look for...'), includes the correct verb 'look for', and specifies purpose 'to ride my bike' or simply 'to ride'. Suggestion: organize sentence with subject + verb phrase + object/purpose, and choose correct tense (present or past) to match meaning. If referring to current behavior, say 'I look for places to ride my bike.'

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