Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and long run-on sentences. For example, say you didn’t have a bike, explain why (e.g. family circumstances or safety), and state a clear plan for the future with a reason.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I enjoyed reading about bikes and watching friends ride, so I often walked to new places instead. In the future I plan to buy a bicycle to explore my neighborhood more easily and keep fit.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion, support it with specific reasons or examples, and use linking words for coherence. Correct small errors and avoid filler words like “sorry.” Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes, and perhaps contrast with other transport options briefly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Nepal. Many teenagers and students use bikes to travel to school or college because they are affordable and convenient. Additionally, in rural areas bicycles are common for short trips where motor vehicles are less accessible.

× When I was a child I don't have a bike but I love riding and going one place to another place which is new new place but but in my future I will definitely buy one bike so I can fulfill my dream.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike, but I loved riding and going from one place to another to explore new places. In the future I will definitely buy a bike so I can fulfill my dream.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. The time phrase 'When I was a child' requires past tense, so 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'I love' should be 'I loved' to match past time. Redundant and awkward phrases like 'going one place to another place which is new new place but but' should be rewritten for clarity: use 'going from one place to another to explore new places.' 'In my future' is unnatural; use 'In the future.' Also use 'buy a bike' rather than 'buy one bike.' Suggestions: keep verb tenses consistent with the time frame, remove repetitions, and use natural collocations like 'go from one place to another' and 'explore new places.'

× In my view, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ In my view, bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is correct. It uses present tense appropriately to describe a general truth or current situation, so no change is needed.

× I live in Nepal, so basically most of the teenage boys want their own bicycle.

✓ I live in Nepal, so basically most teenage boys want their own bicycles.

'Most of the teenage boys' is wordy; 'most teenage boys' is more natural. 'Bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' to agree with the plural subject 'most teenage boys' (Subject-verb agreement / Singular and plural issue, ID 27/1). Use consistent plural form for countable nouns when referring to multiple people owning items.

× Sorry bike for going school or college or going whatever they want.

✓ They use bikes to go to school or college or to go wherever they want.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and lacks clear structure. It omits a subject and misorders words ('Sorry bike' is incorrect). Correct sentence adds subject 'They' and uses infinitive purpose phrases 'to go to school or college' and 'to go wherever they want.' Also 'whatever' should be 'wherever' for places. Suggestions: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and use appropriate prepositions for destinations ('to school').