Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Is your fault I think when you get on.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Do you think they can? What's the name of it?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 18.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不相关且不连贯,未直接回答问题。需要直接给出主题句(有或没有自行车),并补充1–2个具体细节,例如谁给你的、什么时候开始或骑车的感受。同时注意句子结构与语法,避免使用与问题无关的短语。建议:先回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,然后用 because/so/when等连接词补充原因或细节,保持不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near our home. Because the park had a gentle slope, I could practice easily and soon gained confidence.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 12.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有回应考官的问题,而是反问并提出无关问题。需要直接表达观点(popular or not),并给出具体理由或例子支持,如城市交通、环保或通勤习惯。使用连接词(for example, because, so)使表达连贯,保持句子简洁清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities, because many people use them for short commutes to avoid traffic. For example, bike-sharing programs have become common, and you can see many commuters cycling to work during rush hour.
× Is your fault I think when you get on.
✓ I think it's your fault when you get on.
句子语序和结构混乱,缺少主语与适当的从属结构。原句把疑问句的词序误用在陈述句中。建议先用主句表达观点(I think),然后用从句说明原因(it's your fault when you get on)。此外,需使用 it as a dummy subject(it)和动词形式 is 来构成完整句子。
× Do you think they can? What's the name of it?
✓ Do you think they can? What's its name?
第二句代词指代不当。英文中当代词指物时应使用 its 而不是 it 单独出现在名词所有格位置。原句“What's the name of it?”虽然口语可被理解,但更地道和语法正确的结构是“What's its name?”。第一个句子语法正确,无需改动。