Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I think every children has a back.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think backs are really popular in China because nowadays many people likes riding backs and it is kind of sports for modern China.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 发音和词汇使用上有明显错误(如“back”应为“bike”,“children”单复数和语法也不正确)。回答缺少细节,句子单一且不流畅。建议:1) 注意单词发音和拼写,特别是常见名词(bike)。2) 使用正确的主谓一致和单复数形式(every child has)。3) 扩展回答,给出一到两条具体细节(例如什么时候得到自行车、常在哪里骑、是否和朋友/家人一起)。4) 控制在最多5个句子内,并用连接词(e.g., because, so, when)增加连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to school every day. Because it was lightweight, I could easily ride it around the park with my friends. It was my main way of getting exercise and having fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 词汇和拼写错误仍然存在(back → bike)。语法错误包括主谓一致(people like),表达不够具体,且句子结构重复。建议:1) 纠正关键词汇并注意拼写(bike)。2) 使用正确的主谓一致和时态(many people like riding bikes)。3) 提供具体原因和例子(如环保、健身、共享单车的普及)。4) 用连接词(for example, because, therefore)使逻辑更清晰,控制在最多5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips in cities. Additionally, cycling is seen as a healthy activity, so more people ride for exercise. As a result, bike lanes and parking have become more common in urban areas.
× I think every children has a back.
✓ I think every child has a bike.
错误类型:单复数错误。原因:every 后面应接单数名词,因此 children(复数)不正确,且原句将“bike”误写为“back”。建议:使用单数名词 child,并把单词 back 改为正确的 bike。中文建议:每当使用 every 时,后面要用单数形式;同时注意拼写 bike(自行车)。
× Yes, I think backs are really popular in China because nowadays many people likes riding backs and it is kind of sports for modern China.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in China because nowadays many people like riding bikes and it is a kind of sport in modern China.
错误类型:单复数与动词形式等混合(主要是单复数错误和主谓一致)。原因与建议: 1) backs 应为 bikes(拼写错误,且复数形式 bikes 正确); 2) many people 是复数,谓语动词应为 like(第三人称复数),原句 likes 错误; 3) riding backs 改为 riding bikes(拼写); 4) it is kind of sports 改为 it is a kind of sport(不可数/单数名词用法,'a kind of' 后通常接单数或不可数名词); 5) 建议使用 in modern China 表达“在现代中国”。中文建议:注意名词和拼写的单复数形式,many people 后谓语用复数动词;短语 a kind of 后通常接单数或不可数名词。