Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I don't have my own bike when I was was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Every children learn riding a bike when they. When they young and their parents will help them.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法有错误,表达不自然且信息不足。回答应直接用过去时并给出一到两句具体细节,比如谁借你车、为什么没有或何时开始学骑车。注意句子不要超过五句,避免重复。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I often borrowed a neighbour's bike to ride to the park. Eventually, I started saving pocket money and bought my first bike when I was twelve.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 内容方向正确但表达不流畅,有语法及连贯性问题。应用连词使表达更连贯,使用正确的名词形式和时态,并提供具体例子或原因支持观点(如交通、健康或文化原因)。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many families teach their children to ride at an early age. For example, parents often take their kids to nearby parks to practise, and biking is seen as a healthy, inexpensive way to travel short distances.
× I don't have my own bike when I was was a child.
✓ I didn't have my own bike when I was a child.
错误类型:现在时/过去时使用错误。原句中使用了现在时的助动词 “don't” 与时间状语 “when I was a child” (表示过去)不匹配,且有多余的重复单词 “was was”。正确表达过去没有某物应使用过去时助动词 “didn't”。改正建议:把“don't”改为“didn't”,并删除多余的“was”。
× Every children learn riding a bike when they.
✓ Every child learns to ride a bike when they are young.
错误类型:单复数问题 与 主谓一致。短语 “Every children” 不正确,‘every’ 后应接单数名词(every child)。另外,主语是单数时动词要用 third person singular 形式:learn → learns。句尾不完整,缺少谓语和时间状语的完整结构(when they are young)。改正建议:将 “Every children” 改为 “Every child”,把 “learn” 改为 “learns”,并补全从句为 “when they are young”。
× Every child learns to ride a bike when they are young and their parents will help them.
✓ Every child learns to ride a bike when they are young, and their parents help them.
错误类型:动词-ing / 时间与将来时使用不当。原句中“their parents will help them”使用了将来时 but 这里描述一般事实或习惯应使用一般现在时(help),而不是 will help。此外,原句中 “learn riding a bike” 更自然应为 “learns to ride a bike” 或 “learn riding” 的结构需要调整。改正建议:将 “will help” 改为一般现在时 “help”;保持描述习惯性事实时使用一般现在时。