Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-09-23 09:34:47

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't know but but I I think that bikes are not popular in my country.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, tense and expand answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use past tense for childhood and avoid single-word answers. Add linking words if giving extra detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood every weekend. As a result, I became quite confident riding on my own by the age of seven.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and repetition; give a direct opinion in one sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, although). Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for long distances, and public transport is improving. For example, in my city few people cycle to work due to heavy traffic and limited bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have it.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had'. Also, 'it' refers ambiguously to 'a bike' — use 'one' or 'a bike' to be natural. Suggestion: match past tense and clear noun reference (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike.').

Present tense issue

× I don't know but but I I think that bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ I don't know, but I think bikes are not popular in my country.

The main issue is repetition and redundancy ('but but I I'). Remove duplicated words. Tense and structure are otherwise appropriate: 'I don't know' (present) followed by 'I think' (present) is consistent for expressing opinion. Also add a comma after 'I don't know' for clarity. You could also say 'I don't know, but I think bicycles are not very popular in my country.' for smoother phrasing.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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