Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I I do. I did have a big.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. I think that like is popular in our country.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short, contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Give a clear topic sentence in past tense, add one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "When I was a child", "for example", "so") to make it coherent. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a big red bicycle with a comfortable seat and a basket on the front. For example, I used it every afternoon to ride to my friend’s house, so I became quite confident riding in the neighbourhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for instance", "also") to structure your response and avoid vague phrases. Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct minor errors ("like is" → "bicycles are").

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared-bike schemes, so cycling is a convenient and affordable option for daily travel.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I I do. I did have a big.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a big one.

The student mixed present and past tenses and repeated 'I'. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past simple: 'I did' is unnecessary before 'had'; better: 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a big one.' Also 'big' needs a noun ('bike' or 'one'). Remove duplicate 'I' and match tense. Suggestion: 'Yes, I did. I had a big bike.'

Sentence structure errors

× I think that like is popular in our country.

✓ I think that bikes are popular in our country.

The sentence has incorrect word order and a missing noun. 'Like' is incorrect here; the intended subject is 'bikes'. Use plural 'bikes' with present simple 'are' to state a general fact. Suggestion: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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