Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Nope.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is because it's it's low cost and it can enhance your speed.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且不自然。建议用完整句子直接回应问题,然后补充一两句具体细节或原因以丰富内容。比如可以说是否拥有、如果没有说明原因或替代方式。使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city where cycling wasn't safe, so I usually walked or took the bus to school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答有意义但不够自然,有语法和重复问题("it's it's")。建议用更自然的句型展开观点,提供具体细节或例子,并用连接词衔接句子。控制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and good for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or shop nearby, and bike lanes in some cities make cycling safer and faster.
× Yes, it is because it's it's low cost and it can enhance your speed.
✓ Yes, they are because they're low-cost and they can increase your speed.
句子中谈论的是“bikes”(复数),但原句用了单数代词和动词短语(it is),造成主谓不一致。应使用复数代词“they”及复数谓语。另:low cost 作形容词时常写为“low-cost”,表示“成本低的”;“enhance your speed”在此语境下更自然的表达为“increase your speed”或“make you faster”。建议:注意先确定主语单复数,代词和动词要与之保持一致;形容词短语可用连字符连接;选择更常用的动词搭配(increase/make)。