Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I did not have my bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are morally popular in my countries because umm, in my country there are a lot of people who are at middle class, so they cannot afford a car, umm, but they have to bike a uh, buy a bike for the work.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is brief and clear but sounds slightly unnatural and could be more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence ("No, I didn't") and add one short supporting detail if relevant (e.g., why you didn’t have one or what you used instead). Use contractions and correct word order to sound more natural. Keep it under 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammar, word choice and fluency problems and is repetitive. Replace incorrect words ("morally" → "very" or "quite"), fix singular/plural ("country"), remove filler words, and organise reasons with a linking phrase ("because" or "mainly because"). Limit to 3–4 concise sentences with specific detail or an example.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, mainly because many middle-class people cannot afford a car. As a result, they buy bicycles to commute to work or run errands, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I did not have my bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The speaker used the possessive pronoun 'my' which implies ownership; the Examiner's question asked generally 'Did you have a bike...' so the natural response is 'a bike.' Use of 'a' correctly matches the indefinite reference. Use 'a bike' for general possession in past.

Incorrect use of adverbs/adjectives

× Yes, bikes are morally popular in my countries because umm, in my country there are a lot of people who are at middle class, so they cannot afford a car, umm, but they have to bike a uh, buy a bike for the work.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because there are a lot of middle-class people who cannot afford a car, so they have to buy a bike for work.

Multiple issues corrected: 'morally' is the wrong adverb (incorrect word choice) so replaced with 'very' (adverb of degree). 'my countries' is incorrect plural; should be 'my country' (singular). 'people who are at middle class' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'middle-class people' or 'people who are middle class.' 'have to bike a uh, buy a bike' mixes verbs and filler; correct is 'have to buy a bike.' Also removed filler 'umm' and fixed word order and concision. Suggestions: use 'very' or 'quite' for degree, use singular 'country' when referring to one country, say 'middle-class people' or 'people who are middle class,' and use 'buy a bike' to express purchasing.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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