Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep your answer direct and complete. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and a brief statement), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct tense and simple grammar to make your meaning clear. For example, say when you had the bike, who you rode with, and why you enjoyed it. Avoid incomplete sentences and unrelated fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it home from school with my friends every afternoon because cycling was relaxing and fun. After class, we would race along the park path, which helped me forget the stress of studying. Overall, riding a bike was my favorite way to relax after school.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clear, specific reasons or examples. Begin with a short topic sentence (Yes/No and why), then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Use correct word forms and avoid repetition. Mention who uses bikes, where, and any trends or changes over time.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many families keep at least one bike for short trips. For example, parents often ride to the market and children use bikes to go to school. In recent years, bicycle lanes and bike-sharing schemes have made cycling even more common in cities.

× Exactly because bicycles help me for relaxing and enjoyable with my friend when I feel this school. When I come back home, I ask my family every evening for the

✓ I liked riding a bicycle when I was a child because it was relaxing and enjoyable to ride with my friends after school. When I came back home, I asked my family every evening if I could ride.

Multiple sentence structure and grammatical issues: run-on fragments and incorrect word choices. 'Exactly because' is unnatural; use 'I liked... because'. 'help me for relaxing' is incorrect verb and preposition use — use 'was relaxing' or 'helped me relax'. 'enjoyable with my friend' needs 'enjoyable to ride with my friends'. 'when I feel this school' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'after school'. Tense consistency: question asked about childhood, so use past tense ('liked', 'was', 'came', 'asked'). The final clause was incomplete; add 'if I could ride' to complete the meaning. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use clear subject-verb constructions, replace awkward prepositions, and complete sentences with necessary objects or clauses.

× Yes when I saw bicycle is a fame in my country earlier everyone have a bike one bike buy per house per house

✓ Yes. Bicycles used to be very popular in my country; in the past almost every household had at least one bike.

Multiple issues: tense and word choice. 'when I saw' is incorrect for meaning — use 'used to be' or 'were'. 'bicycle is a fame' is ungrammatical; use 'bicycles were very popular' or 'bicycles used to be common'. 'earlier everyone have a bike' has subject-verb agreement and tense errors — use past tense 'almost every household had'. The fragment 'one bike buy per house per house' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'at least one bike per household' or 'one bike per house'. Suggestion: use correct past tense and subject-verb agreement, replace incorrect nouns like 'fame' with 'popular' or 'common', and rephrase fragments into a complete sentence.