Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve zengin olması için küçük ayrıntılar eklenmeli ve cümle yapısı çeşitlendirilmeli. Konu cümlesinden sonra bisikletin nasıl olduğunu, ne sıklıkla kullandığınızı veya bu anının neden hatırlarda kaldığını belirten kısa destekleyici ifadeler ekleyin. Ayrıca tek cümle yerine en fazla 2-3 kısa cümle kullanarak doğal akışı sağlayın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike from about the age of seven. It was a red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it almost every day around the neighborhood until I felt confident enough to cycle on busier streets.

Gợi ý: Cevap fikir belirtiyor fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve düzensiz yapı anlaşılırlığı azaltıyor. Daha akıcı ve doğal olması için düzgün cümle yapısı, bağlaçlar ve spesifik örnekler kullanın. "It depends" ifadesinden sonra kısa bir konu cümlesi kurup ardından nedenleri (örneğin trafik, altyapı eksikliği) ve bir karşılaştırma (diğer şehirler veya ülkeler) ekleyin. Ayrıca dilbilgisi düzeltmeleri ("which city you live in", "the city is very crowded") yapılmalı.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the city. For example, in Istanbul bicycles are less popular because the city is very crowded and many streets lack dedicated bike lanes, whereas in smaller towns or some European cities cycling is much more common due to better infrastructure.

× It depends which city you are live.

✓ It depends on which city you live in.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun/verb combination and missing prepositions. Use 'it depends on' and the correct verb form 'you live' (present tense), and place the preposition 'in' at the end for the correct structure. Suggestion: say 'It depends on which city you live in.'

× I used to live in Istanbul before I moved to the UK and in Istanbul it is very crowded the city and traffic is very busy and there is not always bikeway in every street.

✓ I used to live in Istanbul before I moved to the UK. In Istanbul the city was very crowded and traffic was very busy, and there were not always bike lanes on every street.

This long sentence has multiple issues: run-on sentence and incorrect word order. Break into two sentences to improve clarity. Use past tense consistently for past situations ('was', 'were') and plural 'bike lanes' instead of 'bikeway' to match count. Use 'on every street' as the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: split sentences, keep past tense, use correct noun forms and prepositions.