Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and correctness: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (who gave it, what you used it for, a short memory). Use correct tense and simpler sentence structures to avoid confusion. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and remove redundant words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small bicycle when I was about six, and I used it to learn to ride and to get exercise. I remember being nervous at first, but after a few weeks I became more confident and rode it around the neighborhood every day.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion followed by two specific reasons and, if possible, a brief suggestion or comparison. Use linking words (because, however, therefore) and correct grammar (roads are not safe/traffic is heavy). Keep it concise and specific.

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because traffic is heavy and many roads are unsafe for cyclists. As a result, most people prefer cars or motorbikes, although cycling would be more common if there were dedicated bike lanes.

× I know when I was so shy I have some like a bicycle from my father and he bought me to write and exercise when I was very young so I have one that but the the originally is from.

✓ When I was young I was shy. My father bought me a bicycle so I could ride and exercise.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear references ('I have some like a bicycle', 'he bought me to write'). It also repeats words and has fragments. Correct by using clear subjects and objects: 'My father bought me a bicycle' uses 'my' to show possession and 'me' as the object. Change 'to write' to 'to ride' because the verb for using a bicycle is 'ride'. Split into two sentences to improve clarity and remove redundant words.

× I know when I was so shy I have some like a bicycle from my father and he bought me to write and exercise when I was very young so I have one that but the the originally is from.

✓ When I was young I was shy. My father bought me a bicycle so I could ride and exercise.

The phrase 'the originally is from' incorrectly uses word order and forms. Use the simple past 'bought' to indicate a completed action in the past and remove the unnecessary passive-like phrase. If indicating origin, say 'It was originally from my father' but here 'My father bought me a bicycle' is clearer.

× I don't think so because in my country, the traffic and the road is a bit not freely for the bicycle people or whoever.

✓ I don't think so because in my country traffic and the roads are not very friendly for cyclists.

The original has subject-verb agreement and noun form errors: 'the traffic and the road is' should be 'traffic and the roads are' because the compound subject requires plural verb 'are'. 'a bit not freely' is incorrect adverb/adjective usage; use 'not very friendly' to describe suitability. Replace 'bicycle people or whoever' with 'cyclists' for correct noun usage.

× I don't think so because in my country, the traffic and the road is a bit not freely for the bicycle people or whoever.

✓ I don't think so because in my country traffic and the roads are not very friendly for cyclists.

'a bit not freely' mixes an adverb form with negative structure and is unnatural. Use the adjective 'friendly' with 'not very' to modify suitability. Also use 'cyclists' instead of 'bicycle people' for natural expression.