Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “Bike means Friedman”), and limit to up to five coherent sentences. Add one specific detail and a linking word to make it fluent (for example, mention where you rode or who you rode with). Pronunciation and grammar: change “everyday” to “every day.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It gave me many great childhood memories because I often rode it with my friends around the neighborhood. For example, we used to cycle to the park every Sunday, and sometimes we raced each other along the river. As a result, riding a bike was one of my favorite activities growing up.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more precise and fluent: begin with a clear topic sentence, use linking words (however, for example), correct minor grammar and collocation errors (“all the near the seaside” → “along the seaside”; “not popular for daily transport” → “not widely used for daily transport”). Add a specific example or brief reason (infrastructure, weather, culture) to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially for leisure activities on weekends. For example, many young people and families cycle along the seaside promenades and in city parks. However, they are not widely used for daily commuting because the city lacks safe bike lanes and public transport is often more convenient.

× Bike means Friedman.

✓ 'Bike means 'Friedman'.'

This sentence is unclear and appears to misuse a word. If the student intended to give the bike a name, they should present it as a quoted name with a linking verb: 'My bike was called 'Friedman'.' The original 'means' is present tense and wrong for naming; use 'was called' or 'was named' to describe a past nickname. Suggestion: say 'My bike was called 'Friedman'.' to clearly convey the meaning.

× I used to ride my bike everyday when I was a kid.

✓ 'I used to ride my bike every day when I was a kid.'

Every day is two words when used as an adverbial phrase meaning 'each day'. The fused form 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'. Place the adverbial phrase after the verb phrase as in the correction. Suggestion: use 'every day' for frequency expressions.

× You can see lots of young people and families riding bikes in parks all the near the seaside.

✓ 'You can see lots of young people and families riding bikes in parks all near the seaside.'

The extra article 'the' before 'near' is incorrect. 'Near the seaside' or 'near seaside' can work, but here the idiomatic phrasing is 'all near the seaside' meaning many parks close to the seaside. Remove the extra 'the' after 'all'. Suggestion: use 'all near the seaside' or 'all along the seaside' depending on intended meaning.

× But as I said they are not for popular for daily transport.

✓ 'But as I said, they are not very popular for daily transport.'

This sentence has extra or misplaced words: 'for popular' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'popular' with an adverb modifier if needed: 'not very popular' or 'not popular'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause 'But as I said'. Suggestion: say 'But as I said, they are not very popular for daily transport.'