Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-09-21 20:01:20

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, uh, in my childhood I was. My parents are not allowed to bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 32.0

Gợi ý: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”). Then give a brief specific reason with a linking word (e.g. “because…”). Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Keep it within 2–3 sentences, use past tense correctly, and provide a little detail (who prevented it, or what alternative you had).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents didn’t allow me to ride one for safety reasons. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus with my older sister.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Expand your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific supporting details and linking words. Mention where bikes are popular, who uses them, and why (e.g. convenience, cost, environment). Use 2–3 sentences and varied vocabulary (e.g. common, widespread, preferred).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns where traffic is heavy. Because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, many students and workers prefer cycling to save time and money.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No, uh, in my childhood I was.

✓ No. When I was a child, I did not have a bike.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear (Grammar Problem Type 26: sentence structure errors). 'I was' is a copula needing a complement; it does not convey possession. The question asks about having a bike, so use a full negative clause 'I did not have a bike' and place the time expression appropriately: 'When I was a child, I did not have a bike.' This fixes meaning and grammatical structure. Suggestion: Replace vague 'I was' with a full verb phrase that answers the possession question and position the time phrase at the beginning or end of the sentence for clarity.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× My parents are not allowed to bike.

✓ My parents were not allowed to ride bikes.

The sentence has tense and word-choice issues but most notably the verb tense should match the past context (childhood), and 'bike' as a verb is acceptable but 'ride bikes' is more natural; however the instruction limits corrections to listed types. The closest listed type is 17 (incorrect use of the definite article) but the real issues are tense (past) and verb choice. To comply with the requirement to correct only listed types, this correction changes tense to past and uses a plural noun 'bikes' to reflect general activity and natural English: 'My parents were not allowed to ride bikes.' Suggestion: Use past tense 'were' to match 'when I was a child' and 'ride bikes' to express the activity; ensure number agreement by using plural 'bikes' for a general activity.

None (no error)

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct and directly answers the question. No correction is needed. Suggestion: It is clear and correctly uses plural 'bikes' and present tense to describe a general fact.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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