Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you ever buy coin? You had a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I like this in my country, Australia.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 18.0

Gợi ý: Your response is largely incomprehensible and does not answer the question. Stay on-topic by directly stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you rode it, or a memory). Keep your answer natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences) and use simple linking words like "and" or "so."

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to school almost every day. I remember practicing tricks with my friends in the park, so I became quite confident on two wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Your answer does not directly address popularity and is vague. Begin with a clear opinion about popularity, then support it with specific reasons or examples (e.g., cycling culture, infrastructure, weather, commuting habits). Use linking words such as "because," "for example," or "also" to make your points coherent. Keep responses natural and no longer than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Australia because many cities have good bike lanes and people cycle for both fitness and commuting. For example, in my city there are dedicated cycling paths and several bike-sharing programs, so more people choose to ride to work or school.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Did you ever buy coin? You had a child?

✓ Did you ever have a coin? Were you a child?

The original contains incorrect pronoun and noun usage and incorrect question forms. 'Did you ever buy coin?' likely attempts to ask about possession or having a coin in the past; 'buy' is wrong if asking about possession, and 'coin' needs an article ('a coin'). According to the context ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), the student probably misheard and produced unrelated sentences. 'You had a child?' is ungrammatical for asking about the listener's childhood; use the past-state question 'Were you a child?' or better, 'When you were a child, did you have a bike?' Suggestion: listen to the question and answer the same topic; use correct auxiliary 'did' with base verb for past simple possession ('Did you have a bike?') or 'Were you a child?' for state in past.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I like this in my country, Australia.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country, Australia. I like them.

The student response uses the demonstrative 'this' incorrectly to refer to a general topic ('bikes') and lacks clear subject agreement. 'This' is singular and deictic; to refer to bikes in general use 'they' or repeat the noun. Also the sentence is better split into two: a statement about popularity and a personal preference. Suggestion: refer to plural nouns with 'they' or 'them' and match number and meaning ('I like them').

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