Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more accurate and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use past tense consistently), avoid fillers, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "when", "because", "so").

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had an orange bike when I was about seven, and I could ride it confidently. My grandpa taught me how to balance and pedal, and he would always say, "It's just a piece of metal, so don't be afraid," which helped me overcome my fear.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, support it with specific reasons or examples, and reduce hesitation. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "however", "for example") and precise vocabulary ("commute" instead of "arrive to somewhere").

Ví dụ: Not really. These days few people commute by bike in my city because traffic is heavy and there are limited cycling lanes. For example, most people prefer motorcycles or cars for convenience, and I also rarely use a bike to travel around.

× Yes, I had a orange bike when I was younger and I knew how to ride it very well.

✓ Yes, I had an orange bike when I was younger, and I knew how to ride it very well.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound. 'Orange' begins with a vowel sound so the correct article is 'an'. Also add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses clearly.

× My grandpa, you know, teach me how to ride it and he always told me that Tink has if, uh, it's just, uh, you know, piece of iron and don't be scared.

✓ My grandpa, you know, taught me how to ride it, and he always told me that Tink has it, that it's just a piece of iron, so don't be scared.

The context is past time, so the verb should be past tense: 'teach' -> 'taught'. The original sentence also omitted 'it' after 'has' and the article 'a' before 'piece of iron'. Rephrase punctuation and conjunctions to make the sentence clear: use commas and 'so' to link the clauses. Ensure consistent past-tense verbs.

× These days you just don't see many people riding bikes around the city to, you know, arrive the place they want.

✓ These days you just don't see many people riding bikes around the city to get to the places they want.

'Arrive the place' is ungrammatical in English; the correct verb phrase is 'get to' or 'arrive at'. Also change 'the place' to 'the places' to match 'many people' and plural reference. This fixes sentence structure and collocation.

× And uh, I think, uh, it's not very popular between my people and I myself don't use bikes to, you know, arrive to somewhere.

✓ And, uh, I think, uh, it's not very popular among my people, and I myself don't use bikes to go anywhere.

Use 'among' (not 'between') when referring to popularity within a group. 'Arrive to somewhere' is incorrect; use 'go anywhere' or 'arrive anywhere' but 'go anywhere' is more natural here. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.