Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
To be honest, when I was a child, I don't have a bike because I'm not good at any sports.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Umm, I think so, because when I was a child I saw that lots of people use bike to go to the school or go to the work. So I think it's really popular, but I'm not good at it. So I really wanted to improve my ability to, uh, do it.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你需要使用正确的时态并且回应要更自然、简洁。句子应以主题句开头,然后补充细节。避免出现语法错误(例如时态和动词形式),可以把原因说得更具体。还可以用连接词使句子更连贯。建议练习将回答限制在2–4句内,用过去时谈论童年。
Ví dụ: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't very good at sports. As a result, my parents didn't buy one for me. Instead, I preferred reading books and playing indoor games.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理并提供更具体的细节。开头直接给出观点,然后用连接词(for example, because, therefore)说明原因并给出具体例子(上学、上班、短途出行)。避免重复与自我评价无关的信息(比如再次强调自己不擅长),可以用预测或比较丰富内容。控制在3–4句内更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students often cycle to school and office workers use bikes for trips within the city. In recent years, bike-sharing services have also made cycling more common.
× To be honest, when I was a child, I don't have a bike because I'm not good at any sports.
✓ To be honest, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I wasn't good at any sports.
句中描述过去的情况("when I was a child"),动词应使用过去时。原句使用现在时态("don't have"、"I'm not")与时间状语不一致。建议把动词改为过去时:"didn't have" 和 "wasn't good"。另外,也可更自然地说成 "I wasn't good at sports",省略 any。
× Umm, I think so, because when I was a child I saw that lots of people use bike to go to the school or go to the work.
✓ Umm, I think so, because when I was a child I saw that lots of people used bikes to go to school or to work.
句中主要叙述的是过去发生的事情("when I was a child"),动词应使用过去时:把 "use" 改为 "used"。名词单复数也需注意:"bike" 在此指许多人各自骑车,应使用复数 "bikes"(符合语法项“单复数问题”);另外固定搭配中一般说 "go to school" 和 "go to work",不加定冠词。建议整体改为过去时并修正名词和搭配。
× So I think it's really popular, but I'm not good at it.
✓ So I think they're really popular, but I wasn't good at it.
前句指代 "bikes"(复数),代词和动词要与复数一致:将 "it's" 改为复数形式 "they're" 或将主语改为单数。因为谈论过去的个人能力("when I was a child" 的延续),后半句也需用过去时 "wasn't" 而不是现在时 "I'm not"。此外若保持时态一致,整句应改为过去时。
× So I really wanted to improve my ability to, uh, do it.
✓ So I really wanted to improve my ability to do it.
此句结构问题不大,但有多余的逗号和停顿词 "uh" 可删去使句子更流畅。动词不需要 -ing 形式,直接用不定式 "to do it" 表示想要改善某项能力。简洁的表达更自然。