Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely everyone in my hometown or had a bite to go to school when we were a child and me, absolutely not. Except for that.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes by a very common on my country because it's really cheap and convenient for everyone to use. It also really easy for children to use and is you for all the Starship such as going to school or go to the grocery to buy something.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar: answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail. Use correct vocabulary (bike, ride) and simple past. Keep it within 1–3 sentences. For example, start: “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” Then explain briefly why.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or used public transport with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and specific: state your opinion clearly, then give one or two concrete reasons using linking words (because, for example, so). Correct grammar (are popular, in my country, useful, tasks). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use relevant vocabulary (affordable, convenient, short trips).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many children ride to school and adults use bikes to go to the market or run errands.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, absolutely everyone in my hometown or had a bite to go to school when we were a child and me, absolutely not.

✓ Yes, almost everyone in my hometown had a bike to go to school when we were children, but I did not.

Original sentence has multiple issues: 'everyone ... had a bite' contains a misspelling 'bite' for 'bike' and 'everyone ... had a bike' is fine but 'we were a child and me' mixes singular/plural and pronouns incorrectly. This is a singular/plural problem and also pronoun reference. Use 'children' to match 'we' (plural) and 'I did not' to clarify that the speaker did not have one. Suggestion: use plural nouns and pronouns consistently and replace misspelled words. Note: only corrections relevant to singular/plural and related pronoun agreement were applied.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yes by a very common on my country because it's really cheap and convenient for everyone to use.

✓ Yes, they are very common in my country because they are cheap and convenient for everyone to use.

The original contains adjective/adverb and preposition errors: 'by a very common on my country' is ungrammatical. 'Common' describes 'they' (bikes), so use 'very common' with correct subject and preposition 'in my country'. Also maintain plural agreement with 'they are'. Suggestion: ensure adjectives modify the correct noun and use correct prepositions like 'in' for locations.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It also really easy for children to use and is you for all the Starship such as going to school or go to the grocery to buy something.

✓ They are also really easy for children to use and useful for all the trips, such as going to school or going to the grocery store to buy something.

Original sentence misuses pronouns ('It' and 'is you') and has awkward nouns ('Starship') and verb forms. Pronoun should agree with plural subject 'they' (bikes). 'Useful' was likely intended instead of 'you'. 'Trips' replaces 'Starship'. Also changed 'go to the grocery' to 'going to the grocery store' and used 'going' to match parallel structure. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and choose correct vocabulary and parallel verb forms.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
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