Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bicycle when I was a child. But because the chair is very high, it's difficult to ride, so I don't like that back.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. I think the most popular bike is the electric bike. It's very fast, you can go everywhere if you want and it's cheap.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子有时态和用词错误,表达不够自然且有些冗长。建议:1) 使用正确的时态(过去式)和合适的词(seat而不是chair; didn’t like而不是 don’t like that back)。2) 开头直接回答并给出简短原因(最多3句),用连接词使句子连贯。3) 可加入一两个具体细节(比如年龄或发生的事)来丰富内容。示例回答结构:直接回答 + 简要原因 + 具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. However, I didn’t like it because the seat was too high and I found it hard to balance. I was about eight years old and I often fell over when I tried to ride it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但可更自然、更连贯并提供更具体的理由或对比。建议:1) 用更自然的表达避免简单否定开头,可以先肯定再解释(或直接说部分流行)。2) 用连接词(for example, because, so)来组织原因并给出具体例子(如通勤、短途出行、价格或充电便利)。3) 控制句子数量,不超过5句。
Ví dụ: They are quite popular, but electric bikes are the most common nowadays. For example, many people use e-bikes for commuting because they are fast, affordable and convenient to charge. As a result, traditional bicycles are less seen in busy city areas.
× Yes, I have a bicycle when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.
原句时态混用:句子开头用现在时态“have”,但后半句明确指过去时间“when I was a child”,应使用过去时“had”。建议将动词时态与时间状语保持一致,表示过去经历时使用一般过去时。
× But because the chair is very high, it's difficult to ride, so I don't like that back.
✓ But because the seat was very high, it was difficult to ride, so I didn't like it.
原句存在词汇和句子结构错误:"chair"(椅子)用在自行车上不合适,应为"seat"或"saddle";原句时态混用(现在时与过去时冲突),且短语"don't like that back"不符合英语表达。根据上下文应全部用过去时,且用代词"it"指代自行车。建议使用"seat"并把动词改为过去式,代词改为"it"。
× No, I don't think so.
✓ No, I didn't think so.
根据考官问题“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?”问的是现在情况,学生若要表达自己的现在看法应保持现在时"I don't think so." 如果学生是回顾先前陈述的观点或语境需指过去则用过去时。这里结合下一句内容("I think the most popular bike is the electric bike")语态应统一为现在时。若保留原意表示现在看法,则不需要改动;若按要求只改错误并保持时态一致,上句可保留为"I don't think so."(此处给出建议:若意指现在则无需改)。
× I think the most popular bike is the electric bike.
✓ I think the most popular bike is the electric bike.
此句语法正确,时态和结构恰当。
× It's very fast, you can go everywhere if you want and it's cheap.
✓ It's very fast; you can go everywhere if you want, and it's cheap.
原句语法基本正确,但存在标点和并列句连接问题。建议用分号或句号将独立分句分开,并在并列连词前加逗号以提高可读性;若不要求标点修改,则句子可视为语法正确。