Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike. When I was in a child I was having a bicycle to ride and I since in from childhood I was in the hostel so I can't ride bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country so thank you.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Be clear, use correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence (past tense), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (use past simple for past facts), avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a boarding hostel, so I didn’t have space to keep a bicycle. As a result, I usually walked or used public transport to get around.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid adding irrelevant phrases like “thank you.” Use present simple for general facts and give examples or comparisons to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes or cars because of long distances and poor cycling infrastructure, so cycling is mostly limited to children and recreational use.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of tense and auxiliary (Present vs Past) / Sentence structure / Article errors / Subject-verb agreement

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past simple. Using don't have (present) is tense mismatch. Use 'didn't have' for past negative. Also 'a bike' is correct article-wise.

Article errors; Incorrect preposition and verb tense; Subject-verb agreement; Sentence structure

× When I was in a child I was having a bicycle to ride and I since in from childhood I was in the hostel so I can't ride bike.

✓ When I was a child I had a bicycle to ride, but since I lived in a hostel from childhood I couldn't ride it.

Multiple issues: 'in a child' is incorrect preposition/article; correct phrase is 'when I was a child' (Grammar problem type 11 and 22). 'I was having' uses continuous incorrectly for possession; use past simple 'I had' (type 6/5). 'I since in from childhood' is ungrammatical and should be 'since I lived in a hostel from childhood' (prepositions and sentence structure: types 11 and 26). 'I can't ride bike' is wrong tense and article; in past context use 'couldn't ride it' and include object pronoun 'it' (modal verb past + pronoun: types 4 and 12). Overall the sentence is run-on; broken into clear clauses and correct verb forms improve clarity.

Present vs General Opinion tense; Sentence structure

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country so thank you.

✓ No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country, thank you.

The question asks for a general opinion about the present, so present simple 'don't think' is correct. Minor issues: use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' consistently and add qualifier 'very' if intended. Also 'so thank you' is awkward; replace with a comma before 'thank you' for politeness. This is primarily sentence structure and word choice (types 26 and 13).

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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