Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で短くて明確ですが、発展がなくスコアが伸びにくいです。より自然で効果的にするために、主題文の後で理由や簡単なエピソードを1〜2文付け加えてください。接続語(例えば、"because"や"so")を使って論理的につなぎ、語彙を少し広げて表現を豊かにしましょう。具体的には、なぜ自転車がなかったのか(家族の事情、安全の懸念、交通手段の代替など)や、いつ自転車に初めて乗ったかなどを短く述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, mainly because my parents preferred I walk or take public transport. As a result, I only learned to ride when I was twelve during a summer holiday at my grandparents' house.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 肯定だけの短い返答で終わっており、理由や具体例が欠けています。質問には理由や例を付けて答えることで説得力を高められます。接続語("because", "for example", "however"など)を用い、どのような人たちに人気があるか、人気の理由(通勤・運動・環境配慮など)、都市と地方の違いなど具体的な情報を1〜2文加えてください。語彙も状況に応じた語を使い分けましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, because cycling is an affordable and convenient way to get around in many cities. For example, commuters often use bikes to avoid traffic jams, and there are also many bike-sharing schemes that make cycling more accessible.

Ngữ pháp

None

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses past simple negative 'didn't have' to answer a past-time question. No changes are needed.

None

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural written style: 'Yes, I do.' The sentence is otherwise grammatically correct, using present simple to answer whether bikes are popular in the country. No grammatical error from the provided list applies.

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