Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, my mother buy a boat, a bike when I'm a children set up five years when I'm five years old and my grandfather often taught me how to drive back, but I think I'm not good at bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Oh yes when I was a child The bikes are popular in my country but through the technology technology developing many people now by car traveling.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意时态和语法(例如过去时),并尽量用简洁的句子结构表达主要信息;增加连接词使叙述更连贯;提供更具体的细节(例如谁买的、什么时候学会、学习过程)。例如把零散短语整合为2–3句完整句子,并使用过去时说明过去的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was five, and my grandfather often taught me how to ride it. Although I practiced a lot, I never felt very confident riding on busy roads.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 注意句子结构和词汇选择,使用正确的时态和连接词表达对比(例如“but”后面接清楚的对比信息);避免重复单词,并提供具体原因或例子支持观点(例如交通、生活方式、城市化)。将回答分成两部分:过去情况和现在变化。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes used to be very popular when I was a child because they were cheap and convenient. However, with technological development and rising incomes, many people now prefer to travel by car, especially in larger cities.
× Uh, yes, my mother buy a boat, a bike when I'm a children set up five years when I'm five years old and my grandfather often taught me how to drive back, but I think I'm not good at bike.
✓ Uh, yes. My mother bought a bike when I was five years old, and my grandfather often taught me how to ride it, but I don't think I'm good at riding a bike.
存在多处时态和动词形式错误: 1) “buy” 应为过去式 “bought”,因为说话者在叙述过去的事情(Past tense issue)。 2) “I'm a children set up five years when I'm five years old” 这部分混乱且时态错误,应该使用过去时并简化为 “when I was five years old”。 3) “taught me how to drive back” 用词不当且结构不对,骑自行车应使用 “ride”,过去时 “taught” 前后的宾语需连贯:“taught me how to ride it”。 4) “I think I'm not good at bike” 中的时态与介词使用不当,应改为一般现在时描述现在能力并用动名词和介词:“I don't think I'm good at riding a bike”。 建议:叙述过去经历时全句用过去时,表达现在能力或看法用一般现在时;使用正确动词(buy→bought,ride 而非 drive),并使用恰当的名词短语(a bike / riding a bike)。
× Oh yes when I was a child The bikes are popular in my country but through the technology technology developing many people now by car traveling.
✓ Oh yes. When I was a child, bikes were popular in my country, but with technological development many people now travel by car.
存在时态和介词/句子结构错误: 1) “When I was a child” 是过去时间状语,后半句应使用过去时 “bikes were popular” 而不是现在时(Present tense issue)。 2) “through the technology technology developing” 语序和表达错误,应该使用 “with technological development” 或 “as technology develops”。 3) “many people now by car traveling” 词序错误,正确用法为 “many people now travel by car”。 建议:注意时间状语与主句时态一致;使用常见的固定搭配 like “travel by car” 和 “with technological development / as technology develops”;保持句子清晰的主谓结构。