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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, my mother buy a boat, a bike when I'm a children set up five years when I'm five years old and my grandfather often taught me how to drive back, but I think I'm not good at bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Oh yes when I was a child The bikes are popular in my country but through the technology technology developing many people now by car traveling.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中注意时态和语法(例如过去时),并尽量用简洁的句子结构表达主要信息;增加连接词使叙述更连贯;提供更具体的细节(例如谁买的、什么时候学会、学习过程)。例如把零散短语整合为2–3句完整句子,并使用过去时说明过去的经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was five, and my grandfather often taught me how to ride it. Although I practiced a lot, I never felt very confident riding on busy roads.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 注意句子结构和词汇选择,使用正确的时态和连接词表达对比(例如“but”后面接清楚的对比信息);避免重复单词,并提供具体原因或例子支持观点(例如交通、生活方式、城市化)。将回答分成两部分:过去情况和现在变化。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes used to be very popular when I was a child because they were cheap and convenient. However, with technological development and rising incomes, many people now prefer to travel by car, especially in larger cities.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Uh, yes, my mother buy a boat, a bike when I'm a children set up five years when I'm five years old and my grandfather often taught me how to drive back, but I think I'm not good at bike.

Uh, yes. My mother bought a bike when I was five years old, and my grandfather often taught me how to ride it, but I don't think I'm good at riding a bike.

存在多处时态和动词形式错误: 1) “buy” 应为过去式 “bought”,因为说话者在叙述过去的事情(Past tense issue)。 2) “I'm a children set up five years when I'm five years old” 这部分混乱且时态错误,应该使用过去时并简化为 “when I was five years old”。 3) “taught me how to drive back” 用词不当且结构不对,骑自行车应使用 “ride”,过去时 “taught” 前后的宾语需连贯:“taught me how to ride it”。 4) “I think I'm not good at bike” 中的时态与介词使用不当,应改为一般现在时描述现在能力并用动名词和介词:“I don't think I'm good at riding a bike”。 建议:叙述过去经历时全句用过去时,表达现在能力或看法用一般现在时;使用正确动词(buy→bought,ride 而非 drive),并使用恰当的名词短语(a bike / riding a bike)。

Present tense issue

× Oh yes when I was a child The bikes are popular in my country but through the technology technology developing many people now by car traveling.

Oh yes. When I was a child, bikes were popular in my country, but with technological development many people now travel by car.

存在时态和介词/句子结构错误: 1) “When I was a child” 是过去时间状语,后半句应使用过去时 “bikes were popular” 而不是现在时(Present tense issue)。 2) “through the technology technology developing” 语序和表达错误,应该使用 “with technological development” 或 “as technology develops”。 3) “many people now by car traveling” 词序错误,正确用法为 “many people now travel by car”。 建议:注意时间状语与主句时态一致;使用常见的固定搭配 like “travel by car” 和 “with technological development / as technology develops”;保持句子清晰的主谓结构。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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