Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. Umm when I go to school I can see many people ride back to work, to school and just for. Sport.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短。建议在肯定之后加一句简短的说明或细节(如什么时候有、谁给的、常去哪里骑),保持自然且不冗长。注意控制在最多5句内并使用连词使表述流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容有想法但表达不够清楚,语法和逻辑连接有问题(如“ride back to work, to school and just for. Sport.”)。建议用一到两句明确陈述观点,再用1-2个具体细节或例子支持。避免停顿词(如 "umm")和句子中断。

Ví dụ: Yes, they are very popular. For example, I see many people cycling to work and school every day, and others use bikes for exercise or weekend rides in parks.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Umm when I go to school I can see many people ride back to work, to school and just for. Sport.

✓ Umm, when I go to school I can see many people riding bikes back to work, to school and just for sport.

句中动词短语应使用动名词(-ing)表示正在进行的动作或持续的状态。“see somebody + doing”结构描述看到某人正在做某事,所以应使用“riding”。此外原句中“ride back to work, to school”缺少宾语“bikes”,并且“just for. Sport.”中有不必要的句点且“sport”不需要大写。建议把句子连贯地写为“see many people riding bikes back to work, to school and just for sport”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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