Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather taught me how to keep balance and I practice read it every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, bags are popular in my country. People of all ages, from children to the elderly, often use bicycles for short trips with their friends.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、语法正确并避免冗余。注意时态与动词形式(例如“practice read it”是不正确的),并提供一两句具体细节以丰富内容,同时总句数不超过5句。可用连接词使逻辑更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather taught me how to balance, and I practised riding it every day after school. I remember falling a few times, but after a week I could ride confidently around the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误(用“bags”代替“bikes”),需要用准确词汇并直接回应问题。再提供具体原因或例子来支持观点,使用连接词使句子更连贯。保持句子数量在5句以内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and cities often have bike lanes. For example, students ride to school and older people use bikes to visit local markets.
× I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather taught me how to keep balance and I practice read it every day.
✓ I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather taught me how to keep my balance and I practiced riding it every day.
错误类型:动词 + -ing(第8类)。问题出在第二句中: 1) “keep balance” 应为固定短语 “keep one’s balance” 或 “keep my balance”,需要所有格代词,且需与上下文人称一致。2) “I practice read it every day.” 中同时出现了现在式动词 “practice” 和不带 -ing 的动词 “read”,英语中在表示练习某动作时,动词 practice 后接动名词形式(-ing),且句子时态应与前文一致(过去时)。因此应改为过去时 “practiced riding”。 改进建议(简体中文):在表示“练习做某事”时,practice 后面要用动名词(动词 + -ing);表示保持平衡用短语 keep one’s/my balance;还要注意时态一致,既然前句是过去时,相关动作也常用过去时。例句:"My grandfather taught me how to keep my balance and I practiced riding it every day."
× In my opinion, bags are popular in my country. People of all ages, from children to the elderly, often use bicycles for short trips with their friends.
✓ In my opinion, bicycles are popular in my country. People of all ages, from children to the elderly, often use bicycles for short trips with their friends.
错误类型:句子结构/词语使用(应归入给定列表的第26类句子结构错误,但主要是词汇使用错误,列表中没有专门的“错误名词选择”,因此归为句子结构错误)。原句用“bags” (包) 明显与后文和问题不符,应为“bicycles”(自行车)。 改进建议(简体中文):回答时要确保关键词与问题一致。如果题目问的是“bikes”,回答中不要将其误写为“bags”。检查相似拼写的词以避免笔误或听写错误。