Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a bike when I am a child because I don't know how to ride a bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's very popular because everyone will ride a bike like when they go working and when they go to the school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答时犯了时态和语法错误,句子不自然且信息单一。建议用正确的过去时开始(topic sentence),然后补充具体细节,例如为什么没有自行车、是否曾想学、有没有其他交通方式。使用连接词(e.g. because, so, but)使答案更连贯。保持不超过5句。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I never learned how to ride. Instead, I usually walked to school or took a bus with my parents. I remember wishing I could ride like my friends, but my parents thought it was safer to wait until I was older.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法和用词问题(主谓一致、时态和名词复数),表达有些绝对化。建议先给直接回答,然后用一到两句具体举例说明流行的原因或场景,使用恰当的词汇(e.g. commuting, students)和连接词(for example, because)。避免“everyone”这类绝对用语。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students often cycle to school and office workers ride bikes to nearby train stations to save time and money.
× No, I don't have a bike when I am a child because I don't know how to ride a bike.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride a bike.
问题类型:现在时使用错误(Present tense issue)。 解释:句子在描述过去的情况(“when I was a child”),应该使用过去时态而不是现在时。原句使用了现在时“don't have / am / don't know”,与时间状语不一致。建议将动词改为过去时:"didn't have"、"was"、"didn't know"。这样时态一致,语义清楚。
× Yes, I think it's very popular because everyone will ride a bike like when they go working and when they go to the school.
✓ Yes, I think they're very popular because everyone rides a bike when they go to work or go to school.
问题类型:现在时使用错误(Present tense issue)及少量搭配和冠词问题。 解释:句子整体谈论一般事实,应使用一般现在时,而不是将来时“will ride”。将动词改为一般现在时“rides”(与复数主语 everyone 约定用单三形式,但更自然用被动结构或复数意指bikes)。这里也修正了短语搭配:"go to work" 而不是 "go working",以及去学校一般说 "go to school" 去掉不必要的定冠词 "the"。建议使用:"everyone rides a bike when they go to work or go to school." 若要强调单数/主谓一致,可改为 "everyone rides" 保持语法正确。