Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a back when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think he's quite popular in my country, every child, every every children have a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子有明显发音/拼写错误(back → bike),且回答过于简短、信息量小。建议:1) 纠正发音与用词为 "bike",确保清晰发音;2) 用主题句直接回答,然后补充一到两条具体细节(例如谁给的、什么时候开始、喜欢骑车的原因或记忆);3) 控制在最多5个句子内并使用连接词如 "because" 或 "and" 来衔接细节。示例回答结构:主题句 + 1-2 个支持细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to visit my friends after school. I loved riding because it made me feel free and helped me stay active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子中有代词和主谓一致错误("he's" 不合适),重复词汇("every every children"),且表达笼统。建议:1) 直接用主题句回答并使用正确代词或无代词形式,如 "Yes, bikes are very popular";2) 提供具体支持细节,如谁常骑、在哪些场合、城市与农村的差异或原因(例如环保、锻炼或交通便利);3) 使用连接词(for example, because, especially)使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children use them to go to school, and adults often cycle for short trips because it's cheap and good exercise. In big cities, people also use shared bikes for commuting.
× Yes, I had a back when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
原句将“bike”误写为“back”,这是拼写错误导致的单复数问题表面化。虽然本例更像是拼写错误,但导致名词形式不正确。建议:写作和口语时注意发音与拼写对应,复查单词拼写;如果不确定单词拼写,可用近义词或描述性短语代替。
× Yes, I think he's quite popular in my country, every child, every every children have a bike.
✓ Yes, I think they're quite popular in my country; every child has a bike.
原句存在多处错误:1) 使用“he's”指代“bikes”不正确,应该使用复数代词“they're”或直接用复数名词“bikes are”。2) “every every children” 有重复且“children”是复数,与“every”连用应为单数形式“child”。3) 动词与主语不一致,“every child”作主语时谓语应使用第三人称单数“has”。建议: - 指代复数名词时用复数代词或复数动词结构(they/them 或 bikes are)。 - 使用“every”时名词用单数(every child, every student)。 - 注意主谓一致,第三人称单数主语用动词的第三人称单数形式(has/does)。