Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조와 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 우선 질문에 직접 답하는 주제 문장을 명확히 말한 뒤, 필요한 세부정보(누가 준 건지, 몇 살 때 가졌는지, 기억에 남는 경험)를 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어 설명하세요. 발음과 반복(aabout)을 줄이고 문법(예: 'my mom' 대신 'my mom gave me one' 또는 'I had one from my mom')을 바로잡아야 합니다. 구체적 연습 팁: 1) 주제문 + 2~3개의 구체적 세부사항(나이, 선물한 사람, 기억나는 순간)을 포함해 2~3문장으로 구성 연습. 2) 주요 동사를 현재/과거형으로 정확히 사용해 말하기 연습. 3) 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 문장을 완결형으로 말하기 연습.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mom gave me a bicycle when I was about ten years old. I remember that I practiced riding it every afternoon after school, and it helped me feel more independent.

Gợi ý: 의미는 전달되지만 문법과 어휘 선택, 문장 흐름을 다듬어야 합니다. 'surely'보다는 'definitely'나 'I think so'가 자연스럽고, 'public bicycle'은 'public bike-sharing system' 또는 'public bicycles'로 구체화하세요. 또한 'every Korean every people'처럼 중복을 피하고 'for trip price'는 'for a small fee' 또는 'for free'처럼 정확한 표현으로 바꾸세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유를 보다 논리적으로 제시하세요. 구체적 연습 팁: 1) 주제 문장 후 이유를 'because'나 'for example'로 연결해 2~3개의 구체적 근거(서비스 이름, 이용 상황, 통계적 관찰)를 제시. 2) 숙어/표현(ride, borrow, rent, bike-sharing)을 상황에 맞게 연습.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because we have a nationwide bike-sharing system that people can rent for a small fee. For example, many commuters use these bikes to travel short distances, and tourists often rent them to explore cities.

× Yes, I did my mom but for me when I was about about ten or eleven years old and I

✓ Yes, I did. My mom did too, but I got my bike when I was about ten or eleven years old.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing punctuation and verb phrases, repetition ('about about'), and unclear subject-reference. Break into two sentences to clarify meaning: 'Yes, I did.' answers the question; 'My mom did too' indicates her mom also had a bike; 'but I got my bike when I was about ten or eleven years old' gives the timing. Use 'got' (past tense) for a past event. Remove duplicate word and add appropriate punctuation for clarity.

× I surely think so because we have a public bicycle that every Korean every people can borrow for trip price and we use it a lot.

✓ I definitely think so because we have public bikes that anyone in Korea can borrow for a small fee, and we use them a lot.

Problems include incorrect quantifiers and awkward wording: 'every Korean every people' is incorrect — use 'anyone in Korea' or 'people in Korea' to indicate all individuals. 'public bicycle' should be plural 'public bikes' or 'a public bike system'; 'trip price' is unnatural — use 'a small fee' or 'a low rental fee'. 'surely' is grammatical but 'definitely' is more natural. Ensure subject-verb agreement with plural 'bikes' and use clear, natural collocations.