Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (past tense), and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and give one specific detail or short example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My younger brother and I shared one because our parents couldn’t afford two bikes. Although we had to take turns, we enjoyed riding together around the neighborhood every weekend.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then support it with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid repeating the same idea. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., ''it's'' -> ''they are'' for plural) and finish the sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because fuel is expensive and many people find bikes more economical. For example, commuters in the city often cycle to work to save money on petrol and parking fees.

× Yes, I had a bike uh, actually my brother, younger brother and I have share.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. Actually, my younger brother and I shared it.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect pronoun/reference. 'Have share' is ungrammatical; use the past simple 'shared' to match 'had'. Also use 'younger brother and I' for correct word order and 'it' to refer to the bike. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× I had share the that bike because at that time my parents can't uh afford 2 bikes for both of us, but we enjoyed riding and also.

✓ I shared that bike because at that time my parents couldn't afford two bikes for both of us, but we enjoyed riding.

The verb phrase 'had share' is incorrect; use past simple 'shared'. 'Can't' should be past 'couldn't' to match the past situation. Use the word 'two' instead of the numeral in formal writing. Remove the trailing 'and also' which is incomplete. Keep tense consistent in the past.

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular due to the fuel price and also it's very affordable.

✓ Yes, in my country bicycles are very popular because of fuel prices and because they are very affordable.

'Fuel price' is uncountable in this context; use 'fuel prices' or 'high fuel prices'. 'It's very affordable' is vague; 'they are very affordable' agrees with the plural subject 'bicycles'. Also change 'bikes' to 'bicycles' if needed for formality.

× Most of the people like to ride a bicycle rather than going for a motorbike due to the fuel crisis and.

✓ Most people prefer to ride a bicycle rather than use a motorbike because of the fuel crisis.

'Most of the people' is less natural than 'Most people'. 'Like to ride a bicycle rather than going for a motorbike' mixes structures; use parallel verbs 'prefer to ride... rather than use...'. Remove the trailing 'and' and provide a complete reason 'because of the fuel crisis'.