Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think is my his bikes are. I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because we don't even have bike roads.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve doğrudan yapmalısınız. Soruyu tekrarlamak yerine doğrudan yanıt verin ve kısa bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın. Ardından gerekliyse bir veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (ör. "and", "but", "because") kullanarak akışı sağlayın. Ayrıca kelime sıralamasına ve temel dilbilgisine dikkat edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small, red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Cümlenizi daha düzgün ve akıcı kurmalısınız. Olumsuz görüşünüzü doğrudan ifade eden bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın, ardından sebebinizi açık ve spesifik bir şekilde belirtin. Gerektiğinde bağlaçlar kullanarak (ör. "because", "so", "therefore") mantığı güçlendirin. Dilbilgisi hatalarına (kelime sırası, fazladan kelimeler) dikkat edin.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there are very few dedicated bike lanes and people usually prefer cars or public transport. For example, in my city most streets are crowded and unsafe for cyclists, so few people choose to ride bikes.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect order of words / sentence structure / pronoun use

× No, I don't think is my his bikes are. I don't think that bikes are popular in my country because we don't even have bike roads.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because we don't even have bike lanes.

The original sentence contains multiple word-order and pronoun errors ('is my his bikes are' is ungrammatical). This is primarily a sentence structure problem and incorrect pronoun usage. The clause 'I don't think bikes are popular in my country' is the correct structure: subject (I), verb (don't think), content clause (bikes are popular in my country). Also, 'bike roads' is non-idiomatic; use 'bike lanes' or 'bicycle lanes'. Suggestion: remove the extra words 'is my his' and use the standard clause order. In Turkish: 'Orijinal cümlede kelime sırası ve zamir kullanımı hataları var ("is my his bikes are" ifadesi dilbilgisine aykırı). Doğru yapı "I don't think bikes are popular in my country" şeklindedir. Ayrıca "bike roads" yerine daha doğal olan "bike lanes" ifadesi kullanılmalıdır.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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