Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have I had a bad when I when I ten years old.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes. And now, uh, uh, does there are many share backs on the street and uh, we can read back, uh, more.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法正确。首先用一句清晰的主题句直接回答问题(例如:Yes, I did. / No, I didn’t.),然后补充一到两句具体细节。注意时态一致(过去时),避免重复和填充词。可以说明你自行车的类型、谁送的、最常在哪里骑等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was ten, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要完整并连贯。先给出明确的观点句,然后用一到两句具体支持理由,使用连接词(for example, because, so)使逻辑清晰。注意单词发音和选择(shared bikes, ride bikes),避免重复语气词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular now because many cities offer shared bikes on the streets. For example, people often use these shared bikes to commute short distances, which is convenient and affordable.
× Yes I have I had a bad when I when I ten years old.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was ten years old.
原句时态和句子结构混乱:使用了现在时“I have”与过去时“I had”,且缺少冠词以及“when I ten years old”缺少动词was。建议使用过去时表述儿童时期拥有的事物,并补全主系结构和冠词:"I had a bike when I was ten years old." 这样时态一致,结构完整。
× And now, uh, uh, does there are many share backs on the street and uh, we can read back, uh, more.
✓ And now there are many shared bikes on the street, and we can ride bikes more often.
原句存在代词/助动词使用错误与词汇错误:"does there are" 是错误的助动词搭配;应直接使用"there are"来说明存在。"share backs"与"read back"为拼写/词汇错误,正确为"shared bikes"和"ride bikes"。建议去掉多余的助动词,使用正确名词和动词,保持句子语序:"There are many shared bikes... and we can ride bikes more often." 这样语法正确且表达清晰。