Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I was riding my bike when I was a child and I like ride a bike with my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are popular in my country, but most of people think it's an easy way to go out in our walking words or rider bike for phone.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法需要更准确,回答应更直接并包含一两句具体细节。避免冗长或重复,控制在最多5句内。可以先用主题句直接回答(过去是否有自行车),然后用1–2句具体细节说明例如什么时候、和谁一起或最喜欢的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it almost every afternoon with my best friend, and we often raced down the hill near our school. Riding helped me feel independent and made my childhood very fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 表达要更清晰,避免模糊或不完整的短语。先直接回答(是否流行),然后用连接词(for example, however)给出具体原因或对比。修正语法错误并使用更准确的词汇(e.g. "pedestrians", "riding while using phones").
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient; however, there are safety issues because some riders use their phones while riding.
× Yes, I was riding my bike when I was a child and I like ride a bike with my friend.
✓ Yes, I rode my bike when I was a child and I liked riding a bike with my friend.
问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式 以及过去时使用不一致。句子开头使用过去时“was riding”可以更自然地改为一般过去时“rode”。后半句“I like ride a bike”中同时出现了动词原形和现在时,不符合时态一致性。应使用过去时“liked”并将“ride a bike”改为动名词短语“riding a bike”表示习惯性的动作。建议:描述过去的习惯或经历时,主句与从句时态要一致;习惯性动作可用“liked + doing”或“used to + do”。
× Yes, bikes are popular in my country, but most of people think it's an easy way to go out in our walking words or rider bike for phone.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, but most people think it's easy to go out on foot, or to ride a bike while using a phone.
问题类型:代词/短语使用不当及介词短语错误。原句“most of people”应为“most people”;“go out in our walking words”词不达意,正确应为“go out on foot(步行)”;“rider bike for phone”结构错误,应为“ride a bike while using a phone”或“ride a bike to use a phone”。此外保持逻辑清晰:这里表达的是人们认为步行或骑车时使用手机是容易的(或常见的)。建议:注意常用搭配(most people, on foot, ride a bike, while using a phone),并保持短语语序正确。