Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Of course I have a red bike brought from my parents at my 88. I always ride back with my parents at the park every weekend and we also have to deal with all the difficulties that in in front of my my house, no.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, you know that the car is a high expensive expense in too many peoples in our country because our country is important is a independent, independent middle country, you know so to all so to.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答要点要清晰并且语法正确。首先用现在或过去简单时态表达是否有自行车(此处应为过去式)。避免重复和不必要的词语,按基本结构先给主题句,再用1–2个具体细节支持。注意数字和时间表达(如年龄或“eight”),以及连词使用以保证连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a red bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and we used to ride to the park every weekend. I remember practicing on the quiet street in front of our house until I learned to balance.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接回应“是否流行”,先给立场(yes/no/partly),然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支撑。避免混乱的表达和重复,注意词汇搭配(例如 "expensive" 用法,"many people" 而不是 "too many peoples"),并用连接词(because, so, therefore)组织句子。用简单明了的句子代替复杂不准确的说法。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people choose bikes because cars are expensive and traffic is heavy, so cycling is a cheaper and faster way to get around.
× Of course I have a red bike brought from my parents at my 88.
✓ Of course I had a red bike that my parents bought for me when I was eight.
原句时态错误并且有词汇拼写/用法错误。面试问题“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”要求用过去时回答,原句用现在时“have”。另外“brought from my parents”用法不自然,应为“bought for me by my parents”或更自然的“my parents bought for me”;“my 88”明显是拼写或数字错误,应为“when I was eight”。建议:回忆过去的事实时使用一般过去时;用“bought for me”或“that my parents bought me”表达父母给你买的动作;表年龄用“when I was eight”。
× I always ride back with my parents at the park every weekend and we also have to deal with all the difficulties that in in front of my my house, no.
✓ I used to ride my bike to the park with my parents every weekend, and we also had to deal with all the difficulties in front of my house.
原句时态和用法混乱。问的是过去习惯,应使用过去时或“used to”表示过去经常发生的动作,原句用了现在时“ride”“have”。“ride back with my parents”不自然,改为“ride my bike to the park with my parents”。“that in in front of my my house”有重复、介词位置和多余词语,改为“in front of my house”。句尾的“no”不合适。建议:用“used to”或一般过去时描述过去习惯;避免词语重复;把介词放在正确位置并删除多余的插入词。
× Yeah, you know that the car is a high expensive expense in too many peoples in our country because our country is important is a independent, independent middle country, you know so to all so to.
✓ Yes. Cars are very expensive for many people in our country because our country is a developing middle-income country.
原句时态和主谓数不一致且词汇用法错误。原句用单数“the car is”搭配泛指时应使用复数“Cars are”;“a high expensive expense”不是英语表达,改为“very expensive”;“in too many peoples”中“peoples”错误,应用“people”;“important is a independent, independent middle country”语序混乱,重复单词且冠词错误,应为“a developing middle-income country”或“an independent middle-income country”,但根据语境更像想表达“发展中国家/中等收入国家”。建议:泛指时用复数或不定冠词+单数;用常见搭配“expensive for many people”;避免词重复,选择准确词汇如“developing”或“middle-income”。