Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, use past tense for childhood events, correct grammar, and organize into a topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Use linking words and specific details (when, who, where, how often). Avoid repetition and unclear words.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child that my father bought for me when I was eight. I rode it every day around my neighborhood and to school, which made that day very memorable because it gave me freedom and confidence. For example, I used to cycle to the park with my friends every afternoon.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct opinion, then give 2–3 specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words (for example, because, moreover, as a result). Use precise vocabulary (traffic congestion, safety concerns, infrastructure) and avoid filler phrases.

Ví dụ: Not really. Many people are reluctant to cycle because cities have heavy traffic and poor cycling infrastructure, which increases the risk of accidents. Moreover, during peak hours roads are crowded with cars and buses, so people prefer motorbikes or cars for safety and convenience.

× Yes I do I do have a bike which my father brought it to me and I use every day I remember that day that is wonderful day and I just you know, ride my bicycle. I to everywhere with a wheelchide.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike that my father bought for me, and I used it every day. I remember that day; it was a wonderful day, and I just, you know, rode my bicycle. I went everywhere with a wheelchair.

Errors involve incorrect past participle and past tense forms: 'brought it to me' is awkward and 'bought for me' is correct past participle of buy; 'do have' is present tense but the question asked about past so use 'did' and 'had'; 'use every day' should be past 'used every day'; 'ride' should be past 'rode'; 'I to everywhere' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'I went everywhere'; 'wheelchide' is a misspelling of 'wheelchair' or possibly 'wheelie' but context suggests 'wheelchair'. Suggestions: match tense to past context, use correct past participles (bought), use appropriate verbs ('had', 'used', 'rode', 'went'), and correct spelling.

× Not really because there's a lot of reason that people afraid to using bikes and that's when our traffic jam there's a lot of vehicle and using a bike can lead to you know accident.

✓ Not really, because there are many reasons. People are afraid of using bikes, and when there is a traffic jam with many vehicles, using a bike can lead to accidents.

Multiple present-tense and agreement errors: 'there's a lot of reason' should be 'there are many reasons' to agree with plural; 'people afraid to using bikes' is incorrect structure — use 'people are afraid of using bikes' (adjective + preposition + gerund); 'that's when our traffic jam there's a lot of vehicle' is ungrammatical and repetitive — clarify as 'when there is a traffic jam with many vehicles'; 'you know accident' should be 'accidents' plural. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement ('there are'), use correct prepositions with adjectives ('afraid of'), use gerund after preposition ('using'), and keep noun number consistent ('many vehicles', 'accidents').