Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler sounds. For example, say the bike’s age or a memorable event and whom you rode with.

Ví dụ: Yes — I had a bright red bike when I was about eight. I loved it because it was fast and light, so I often raced my neighbour after school. Also, my brother taught me how to balance on it, which made me more confident on the road.

Gợi ý: Organise your answer with a clear opinion plus specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so, and) and avoid hesitation. Mention where and who rides bikes and why they are popular.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike tracks. For example, near my home there is a park with a cycling track where families and commuters ride every morning and evening, especially because cycling is cheap and healthy.

× That bike was red bike I I really liked it and I used to ride it with Rd. with my friend.

✓ That bike was red. I really liked it, and I used to ride it with my friend.

The original contains repetition ('red bike'), a missing punctuation leading to run-on sentence, filler 'I I', and an unclear 'Rd.' The error falls under sentence structure errors (ID 26) because clauses are not properly separated and extra words create confusion. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, use a period to separate independent clauses, include a comma before 'and' when joining independent clauses, and remove unclear or accidental text ('Rd.'). Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× whenever I go out my park, around the park that nearby my home, uh, there is a track for bicycle and lots of people are every or by every time.

✓ Whenever I go to the park near my home, there is a bicycle track around the park and lots of people are there all the time.

This sentence has several preposition and word order errors so it matches Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). Problems include 'go out my park' instead of 'go to the park', 'that nearby my home' should be 'near my home', and 'track for bicycle' should be 'bicycle track'. Also 'are every or by every time' is incorrect phrasing; 'all the time' or 'there all the time' is appropriate. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('to', 'near'), place modifiers next to the nouns they describe, and use common adverbial phrases like 'all the time'. Grammar Problem Type ID:11

× there is a track for bicycle and lots of people are every or by every time.

✓ there is a bicycle track and lots of people are there all the time.

'Track for bicycle' uses singular noun without an article; 'bicycle' should be a noun modifier 'bicycle track' or 'a track for bicycles'. This is a singular/plural and article choice issue (ID 1 and also touches article errors ID 22). Here we correct to 'a bicycle track' or combine as 'bicycle track' with 'there' added for clarity. Suggestion: use noun modifiers ('bicycle track') or plural when using 'for' ('track for bicycles') and include an article ('a'). Grammar Problem Type ID:1