Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. When I was a child I had a bike with two small wheels.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do, and they actually are popular in my country. We had a lot of shared bikes in the streets, especially in cities.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时时态使用不准确且信息较少。应使用过去时描述童年,并增加一两句具体细节(例如是谁买的、骑在哪里、是否学会平衡等),用连接词使句子更连贯。保持自然简洁,最多五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike with two training wheels that my parents bought for me when I was six. I practiced riding it in the quiet street near our house until I felt confident. After a few months I removed the training wheels and could ride by myself.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容总体相关但有时态和细节问题。把时态统一为一般现在时,提供更具体的原因或对比(例如通勤、环保或交通拥堵的替代),并使用连接词(such as, because, therefore)使表达更连贯。保持不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. In many cities you can find numerous shared bikes on the streets, which many people use for short commutes. As a result, cycling has become a common choice to avoid traffic and reduce pollution.

Ngữ pháp

Third person singular issue

× Yes I do. When I was a child I had a bike with two small wheels.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child I had a bike with two small wheels.

原句中的回答“Yes I do.”与问题“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”时态不一致。问题使用过去时(Did),因此回答也应使用过去时(did)。建议用“Yes, I did.”表示过去确实有。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do, and they actually are popular in my country. We had a lot of shared bikes in the streets, especially in cities.

✓ Yes, I do, and they are actually popular in my country. We have a lot of shared bikes in the streets, especially in cities.

这里有两个问题: 1) “they actually are popular”语序虽不错误,但更自然的是“they are actually popular”。主要是风格问题,可保留时态。2) 第二句“We had a lot of shared bikes”使用过去时与前句现在时不一致。问题在于谈论当前普及情况应使用现在时,因此应改为“We have a lot of shared bikes...”。建议整体保持现在时态描述现在的事实:"they are actually popular"和"we have a lot..."。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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