Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Well, when I was a child, I didn't have any bike where I had a bicycle.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country because there are lots of young people like bikes for traveling or rising.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid contradictory phrases, correct word choice (bike vs bicycle is fine but don't say both confusingly), and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Also correct grammar: use past simple (I didn't have a bike) and avoid unclear clauses.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, my family usually walked or took the bus, so I didn't learn to ride until I was a teenager.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Provide a clear main idea and improve accuracy and vocabulary. Use a linking word to introduce a reason, choose correct verbs (ride, not rising), and add a specific example or brief comparison to support your point. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences and avoid vague phrases like 'lots of'.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular because many young people use them to commute to university and work. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes that make cycling convenient and cheap.

Ngữ pháp

Word choice and article/structure errors (covers multiple IDs: 22, 26, 11, 13)

× Well, when I was a child, I didn't have any bike where I had a bicycle.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike; I had a bicycle.

This sentence has several issues: incorrect use of 'any' with a singular countable noun (Article errors, ID 22) and awkward clause 'where I had a bicycle' that breaks sentence structure (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Use 'a bike' not 'any bike' because singular countable nouns require an article. Replace the confusing clause with a clear contrast using a semicolon or 'but' ('I didn't have a bike; I had a bicycle' or 'I didn't have a bike, but I had a bicycle'). Suggestion: choose one clear connector and use correct articles for countable nouns. Next suggestion applies to the second student sentence.

Wrong verb choice / preposition and gerund form (covers IDs 11 and 8)

× Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country because there are lots of young people like bikes for traveling or rising.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country because lots of young people like using bikes for travel or riding.

Problems include incorrect verb 'rising' (should be 'riding') which is a wrong word choice/gerund issue (Verb + -ing form, ID 8) and slightly odd preposition/structure 'for traveling' which is better as 'for travel' or 'to travel' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Also 'like bikes' is acceptable but more natural is 'like using bikes'. Suggestions: use the correct gerund 'riding' for bicycle activity, prefer 'travel' or 'to travel' after 'for' depending on style, and consider adding 'using' to clarify that people use bikes for transportation.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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