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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in my country 'cause we will rent free bike for. Commuting.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答语法不正确且信息过少。需要用正确的时态(过去式)并且给出简短理由或细节来丰富答案。例如说明什么时候得到自行车、是否常骑、在哪里骑等。注意句子不要太长,控制在3–4句内,并使用衔接词如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood. Because my parents lived nearby, I often rode to visit my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 句子语法与表达不够自然,信息不完整。应使用完整句并解释原因或举例,使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。说明共享单车的情况、使用场景或谁常用更具体。控制在2–4句内,语言自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many cities offer free or low-cost bike rental programs. For example, people often use shared bikes for short commutes to work or to run errands, especially in busy downtown areas.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题类型:现在时使用不当。原句中主句用的是现在时态“have”,但时间状语“when I was a child”明确指过去,因此动词应使用过去时“had”。建议:当提到过去发生的事情或状态时,把动词改为过去时;在此句中将“have”改为“had”。

Modal verb usage

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country 'cause we will rent free bike for. Commuting.

Yes, bikes are popular in my country because we can rent bikes for free for commuting.

问题类型:情态动词和词序使用不当。原句中用“will rent free bike”混淆了未来时和能力/许可表达,且“for. Commuting”断句错误。应使用情态动词“can”表示有能力或可得到的服务,并调整词序为“rent bikes for free”。建议:使用“can”表能力/允许;注意名词单复数(bikes),把“for free”放在动词后并把“for commuting”与前半句连成一完整短语;避免随意断句或标点。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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