Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I had a bike when I was a child it was given to me by my family for my second birthday
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 句子需要更自然、完整且有层次。回答应以主题句开头,然后用连词和具体细节扩展(如描述自行车的样子、你怎样使用它、记忆等)。注意标点与句子分割,避免冗长的单句。可以使用连接词如 “and”, “because”, “when” 来组织信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My family gave me a small red bike for my second birthday, and I still remember learning to ride it in our backyard. Because it had training wheels, I felt safe and soon gained confidence to ride on my own.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短,缺乏细节和支持理由。应直接给出观点并用1–2个句子解释为什么(例如谈到通勤、运动或环境因素),使用连接词使回答更连贯。尽量提供具体例子或比较以增强说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities where people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, many students and office workers prefer cycling because it is cheap, healthy and helps avoid traffic.
× Yes I had a bike when I was a child it was given to me by my family for my second birthday
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was given to me by my family for my second birthday.
问题类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句由两个独立子句直接相连,缺少标点或连词,造成 run-on sentence(逗号拼接或并列句错误)。应在两独立句之间使用句号或分号,或者用连词(如 and, because)连接。建议:在英语书写中注意用适当的标点把独立子句分开;如果想表达因果可用连词,例如 “It was given to me by my family because it was my second birthday.”
× Yes, I think
✓ Yes, I think so.
问题类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句不完整,think 后通常需要宾语或补语(如 think so, think that...)来完成句义。直接说 “Yes, I think” 在口语中可能被接受但书面上不完整。建议:补全宾语,例如 “Yes, I think so.” 或者具体说明观点 “Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.”