Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and article use, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, correct the phrase "when I was child" to "when I was a child" and consider adding a reason or brief explanation with "because" or "but". Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there wasn't enough storage space. However, I used to borrow my friend's bike sometimes to ride in the park.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, correct word choice and grammar, and remove filler sounds like "uh." Use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons linked with cohesive devices (e.g., "because", "also"). Fix mistakes: "messages" → "people", "in nearby" → "for short trips" or "nearby", and subject-verb agreement "it do not" → "they do not". Stay concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. Also, bikes are convenient and inexpensive, and they don't take much space to park.

× No, when I was child I didn't have a bike.

✓ No, when I was a child I didn't have a bike.

The noun 'child' requires the article 'a' in this context. This is a sentence structure/article error: the phrase should be 'a child'. Add 'a' to make the noun countable and the sentence grammatically correct. Suggestion: include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns (e.g., 'a child').

× Definitely, I believe that bikes are very popular in my country because uh, many messages prefer to use bikes in nearby because it do not take much space.

✓ Definitely, I believe that bikes are very popular in my country because, uh, many people prefer to use bikes nearby because they do not take up much space.

Multiple issues here: 'messages' is incorrect as a noun for people; the correct word is 'people' (pronoun/noun choice). 'in nearby' is incorrect prepositional use; use 'nearby' as an adverb after the verb. 'it do not' has subject-verb agreement and pronoun errors: plural subject requires 'they do not' and 'take up' is the correct phrasal verb for occupying space. The corrections address pronoun/noun choice, preposition/adverb use, and subject-verb agreement. Suggestions: use 'people' for persons, place 'nearby' correctly ('use bikes nearby' or 'in nearby areas'), match plural subjects with plural pronouns/verbs, and use 'take up' for occupying space.