Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I remember that I was got back when I was ten years It with my birthday gift from my mom.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. In my country, people often ride a bicycle on the city.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 内容要点不够清晰且有语法错误。回答时应先直接回应问题,然后用一两句具体细节补充(例如谁送的、什么时候学会骑、对你的意义)。注意时态和词序,避免冗长或重复。可以把句子控制在最多五句内,并使用连词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I received a bike as a birthday present from my mother when I turned ten, and I learned to ride it that summer. It became my favorite way to explore the neighborhood and I rode it nearly every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达简短但需更具体并改正搭配与介词错误。回答时先给出直接意见,然后用1–2句具体理由或例子支持(例如通勤、环保、交通拥堵、城市设施)。使用恰当的词汇和连词,使回答更自然连贯。
Ví dụ: Absolutely. Bicycles are very popular, especially in cities where many people use them for short commutes to work or school. They are affordable, eco-friendly and often faster than cars during rush hour.
× Yes, I remember that I was got back when I was ten years It with my birthday gift from my mom.
✓ Yes, I remember that I got it back when I was ten years old; it was a birthday gift from my mom.
句子中出现多个问题,但根据给定列表只修正与“过去时”相关的错误。“was got”是错误的被动或过去时表达,正确应使用简单过去式“got”。此外,原句缺少“old”来表示年龄,代词顺序和标点也需调整以保持清晰。建议:用简单过去时描述过去发生的动作,‘I got it when I was ten years old’。
× In my country, people often ride a bicycle on the city.
✓ In my country, people often ride bicycles in the city.
原句使用了错误的介词‘on the city’和单数可数名词搭配不当。应使用介词‘in’表示在城市里,且谈论一般习惯时可用复数名词‘bicycles’或不定式’ride a bicycle‘配合上下文。建议:使用‘in the city’表示位置,并根据泛指改为复数或不定式一致。