Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had that back when I was a child. My parents gave it to me as a birthday gift and I loved reading it around the neighborhood with a small basket attached to front. I often rolled it to the park with my friends, which made me feel independent.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is popular in my country. In China, people know. Like green going and the bark is very green.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 答案要更自然、清晰並修正錯誤。首先用一個明確的主題句直接回答(例如:Yes, I did.),然後補充具體細節,避免用詞錯誤(把“reading”改為“riding”,“rolled”改為“rode”)。控制回答長度在2–4句之內,使用連接詞(for example, so, which)使語意連貫,並加入一兩個具體細節(車子的顏色或和朋友去玩的頻率)以增加內容豐富度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bright red bike for my tenth birthday, and it had a small basket on the front. I often rode it around the neighborhood and to the park with my friends, which made me feel more independent and confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 內容不清楚且表達混亂,需要直接回答並提供具體例子或原因。先用主題句肯定或否定(例如:Yes, bicycles are quite popular in China),再用1–2句具體說明原因(環保、交通便利、共享單車普及等),並使用合適詞彙避免模糊片語(避免“green going”和“bark is very green”這類不明表述)。句子保持簡潔並用連接詞(because, for example)提高連貫性。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in China because they are cheap, environmentally friendly, and convenient for short trips. For example, in many cities shared-bike services are common, so a lot of people use bikes to commute to work or run errands.
× I had that back when I was a child.
✓ I had one back when I was a child.
原句中使用了指示代词 "that" 指代单车,但在上下文中更自然的表达是用不定代词 "one" 来指代一辆自行车。建议使用 "one" 表示“那一辆”。
× My parents gave it to me as a birthday gift and I loved reading it around the neighborhood with a small basket attached to front.
✓ My parents gave it to me as a birthday gift and I loved riding it around the neighborhood with a small basket attached to the front.
原句有两处问题:1) 单词 "reading" 使用错误,应为动词 "ride"(骑),这里涉及动词选择错误,属动词形式问题(按列表第8/9项也相关),但主要为不正确动词使用,按要求修正为 "riding"。2) 介词短语缺少定冠词,应为 "attached to the front"。建议记住固定搭配:"ride a bike",以及在说“车的前面”时使用定冠词 "the front"。
× I often rolled it to the park with my friends, which made me feel independent.
✓ I often rode it to the park with my friends, which made me feel independent.
原句使用 "rolled" 不合适,骑自行车应使用动词 "ride",其过去式为 "rode"。这里是一般过去时描述过去习惯动作,应使用过去式 "rode" 而不是 "rolled"(滚动)。建议把与骑车动作相关的动词记为 "ride - rode - ridden"。
× Yes, it is popular in my country.
✓ Yes, they are popular in my country.
谈论“自行车”(bikes)为复数名词,谓语动词应与复数主语一致。原句用单数代词 "it" 与后文问题“Do you think bikes are popular...”不一致,应改为复数代词 "they" 和复数动词 "are"。建议注意代词须与先行词数一致。
× In China, people know. Like green going and the bark is very green.
✓ In China, many people ride bikes. They are popular because biking is environmentally friendly and practical.
原句结构混乱且含义不明:"people know" 无明确宾语,"Like green going and the bark is very green" 语法和词汇均不正确("bark" 无关;猜测想表达“环保”或“绿化”意图)。按上下文改为清晰表达:很多人骑自行车,原因是环保(green)且实用。建议在表达原因时使用完整句子,避免直接片段和错误词汇。