Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is popular in my country because many people ride bikes to go to school or to walk.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,未直接回答问题。根据评分规则,应先给出主题句直接回应问题,然后用一两句具体细节支持答案。尽量避免逐字重复考官的问题,控制在最多5句内,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to visit my grandparents every weekend. It helped me learn balance and made me feel very independent, so I have fond memories of it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答给出了肯定并提供了原因,但表述有些笼统或不够自然(如用“to walk”不恰当)。建议用更具体的例子、连接词来展开并用更准确的词汇。控制在不超过5句,加入比较或频率词能更丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many students cycle to school and commuters use bikes for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. In recent years, bike-sharing schemes have also increased their popularity in cities.
× Yes, I think it is popular in my country because many people ride bikes to go to school or to walk.
✓ Yes, I think they are popular in my country because many people ride bikes to go to school or for short walks.
错误类型:第三人称单数问题(代词与复数名词的主谓不一致)。 说明:原句中用代词“it”指代复数名词“bikes”,应使用复数代词“they”。另外,短途步行更自然的表达为“for short walks”而不是“to walk”。 建议:当指代复数名词时使用复数代词(they/them);选择与上下文更搭配的短语,比如“for short walks”。