Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn ý tưởng khá rõ nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ dùng sai và câu thừa dài. Cụ thể: 1) Dùng thì không nhất quán (mix present và past). 2) Câu thứ 4 không rõ nghĩa và có từ sai ("baking me manually" sai; có lẽ bạn muốn nói mẹ không phải đưa/đón bạn). 3) Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó đưa 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể, và dùng từ nối phù hợp để mạch lạc. 4) Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, tránh lặp ý để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had my own bicycle when I was a child and I used it to ride to school every day. Because I could cycle by myself, my mother didn’t need to drive me to school, which made things easier for her.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời ý tưởng có thể nhưng diễn đạt rất mơ hồ và nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng: 1) Nhiều từ sai/misspelling ("bird vehicles", "by" thay vì "bicycles/bikes"). 2) Không nêu lý do cụ thể và thiếu ví dụ/so sánh rõ ràng. 3) Cần bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể và có từ nối (e.g., "because", "for example"). 4) Giữ câu ngắn, dùng từ vựng phù hợp với chủ đề giao thông.

Ví dụ: Not really. Nowadays many people prefer motorbikes and cars for convenience and speed. For example, in cities public transport and ride‑hailing services are common, so fewer people choose bicycles for everyday travel.

× I remember that every day I went to school by my bike.

✓ I remember that every day I used to go to school on my bike.

The sentence originally used simple past 'went' which is grammatically acceptable, but when describing a habitual action in the past with 'I remember that', using 'used to' clarifies the repeated/habitual nature. Also preposition 'on' is more natural with 'bike'. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for past habits and 'on my bike' for mode of transport.

× By doing this I can have my mom relax rather than baking me manually.

✓ By doing this I could let my mom relax instead of having her carry me manually.

Original sentence has several issues: tense mismatch ('can' should be past 'could' to match 'I had' context), wrong verb 'baking' (wrong word choice) and awkward phrase 'manually'. Correct structure uses 'let/allow' or 'have' + object + verb ('have her carry me') and 'instead of' for contrast. Suggestion: match past context, choose correct verbs ('carry' not 'bake'), and use 'instead of' for comparisons.

× Not really because in today world I can't see a lot of bird vehicles in the tree so that I think by isn't as important as it was in the past.

✓ Not really, because in today's world I don't see many bikes on the streets, so I think bikes aren't as important as they were in the past.

Multiple errors: 'in today world' should be 'in today's world' (possessive), 'can't see' is odd in general statement - use 'don't see', 'a lot of bird vehicles in the tree' is nonsensical and likely intended 'many bikes on the streets'; 'by' is wrong word — should be 'bikes'; 'isn't' should agree with plural subject 'bikes', so 'aren't'; tense 'as it was' should be 'as they were' to match plural. Suggestions: use correct possessive form, correct subject-verb agreement for plural nouns, use appropriate vocabulary ('bikes', 'streets'), and keep consistent tense.